The Tale of My First Car

I never even drove till I was maybe twenty-five,
but then I learned, and so we bought a car for me to drive.

For fifteen hundred dollars, I got a crap sports car
with color kind of pink. That Monza never got me far!

Its brand I think was obsolete; I can't recall its look.
All that I recall was all my money that it took.

About a month I had it till our whole small family
used that car to take a Christmas trip out of the city.

So headed for the south we left, and yet we had no clue. . . . 
Not even halfway out of our own state, the engine blew.

We had to pay to tow it home, and I cannot recall
If we later took our truck to make that trip at all!

Fixing it was not worthwhile. The engine block was shot.
Thanks to that, I got a blue Camaro, used but HOT!

And so the life of my first car, once I got it home,
was just about as lengthy as the lines of this short poem.


For Paula Swanson's "Driving Me Crazy" Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 9/4/2011 5:45:00 PM
That car would drive me crazy...lol Good luck as Paula judges. CR
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Date: 9/1/2011 7:22:00 PM
well that would have drove me crazy too Andrea.. neatly written with lots of honest sass and class my friend.. experience with crappy cars makes one buy brand new ..haha.. happened to me too luv..good luck...
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Date: 9/1/2011 12:53:00 AM
well nice couplets Andrea, interesting tale. As for me i have to many first cars..lol.. enjoyed your entry,..p.d.
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Date: 8/31/2011 5:54:00 PM
This is funny reminds me of a little Hill man I drove for 3 years and only paid 100.00 for it. GOTTA GO as Ryan is back from Saskatoon. love phyl
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Date: 8/31/2011 3:39:00 PM
Makes me think of all the worn out cars I see broke down on the freeway these days. 1,500 doesn't go very far some times. You just end up where you started from.
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Date: 8/31/2011 3:08:00 PM
oh my, i see you looking utterly frustrated with this whatchamacallit car, lol!... a fun, fun piece with matching well-crafted images and phrasing.. this car willl lead you to the winning tracks, heartie! :) hugggs, nette
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Date: 8/31/2011 9:52:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your work about your first car..Reads like a winnner to me..Good luck in the contest...You can just copy and paste a picture from the internet..Sara
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Date: 8/31/2011 9:37:00 AM
Youe last verse made me smile, great poem for the contest... I am sending you a soupymail ~~
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Date: 8/31/2011 8:33:00 AM
I have been reading some very overwhelming poetry this morning Andrea. I have enjoyed reading yours as usual and hope to be reading more of it soon. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/31/2011 7:31:00 AM
I can relate to what you say exactly with my first car in 1971, andrea
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Date: 8/31/2011 6:43:00 AM
LOL, Oh dear - I could just imagine the scene with your Christmas trip
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Date: 8/31/2011 3:43:00 AM
Everyone remembers their first love and so it seems their first car. Glad you came of better second time around and can smile at the memory. Good one Andrea. luv Margaret
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Date: 8/31/2011 12:40:00 AM
haha...enjoyed this humorous write from you Andrea.....our 1st car was some sort of this one....best wishes:)
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Date: 8/31/2011 12:21:00 AM
Oh yeah, Andrea. We should give Kash a Double Dog Dare next! ha ha. I forgot that over the thousands of miles between us..the meaning of words is lost...U made my whole day with your lil fun. I know Kash is smiling too. I think u guys need to collaborate on a poem next!...my car poem could be sorta naughty...I will have to skip this one. I got a car from my dad from a preacher with paraphenalia in it. :( Gwendolen
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Date: 8/30/2011 11:23:00 PM
Now that IS funny! Hey, Andrea, trophy you deserve for this well honed, smile maker. The meter's dead accurate and not a back-fire in sight! :-) Wonderbar, chum
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Date: 8/30/2011 11:08:00 PM
O boy! what a poem you have here! good luck Andrea, in the contest.
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Date: 8/30/2011 10:29:00 PM
Ha ha, that was humorous! Very funny! I had a pretty good first car actually, but I see you had quite the opposite! That happens a lot when you have a small amount of money and your buying your first car! I thought you put the poem together quite awesomely! Thank you for sharing this write!! Good luck in the contest!!
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Date: 8/30/2011 10:26:00 PM
Oh, lucky ME!!! I am the very first one to read and comment on this hot poem!! Great story,,,great amount of money spent to do research on this poem,,,and if I am not mistaken, don't YOU DRIVE AN AWESOME WHITE CONVERTABLE NOW???? You will never be caught breaking down again!! You are on a roll, sista! Can't get much hotter than this.
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Date: 8/30/2011 10:26:00 PM
Nancy beat me to the punch! haha.
Date: 8/30/2011 10:25:00 PM
DUDE! yah, sis, blue camaros are HOT! preeshya ~n
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