The System Failure

It seems we are always
trying to improve – innovate;
which is not the same as
procreate; though the two
can be combined...resulting
in far fewer divorces – maybe?

The problem is, trying always
gets in the way: it’s simple Physics:
takes energy to do motion – leaving
less energy for each rising degree 
of devotion; till the system failure
a fatal delight –
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Romios Avatar
September 22, 2020 at 7:59 PM
Hey did you know this one of the most popular recent poems. You are 77 out of 100, Congrats. Pangie xxx
DiMino Avatar
September 24, 2020 at 3:12 PM
I did not know that...Wow! Thank you, Pangie. xxx
One Avatar
September 2, 2020 at 9:15 AM
You are right, but so little improve their inner selves...
DiMino Avatar
September 2, 2020 at 9:34 AM
So right, my friend. Better to just do than try. Making something more complicated than need be, leads to failure. Have a great day Si!
Sands Avatar
September 1, 2020 at 3:58 AM
Joe this is great. I enjoyed it :)
DiMino Avatar
September 1, 2020 at 6:29 AM
Hi Heidi; thank you. Have a beautiful Day!
Andresen Avatar
August 31, 2020 at 11:55 AM
- ... yes, it's simple physics ... great written, Joe :) - // Anne-Lise :)
DiMino Avatar
August 31, 2020 at 8:40 PM
Hi Sunshine; thank you so much. Have a great evening!!
Romios Avatar
August 31, 2020 at 7:29 AM
Prince de Mino...))) An insightful verse with a dash of humor. Really liked this. A FAV Panagiota
DiMino Avatar
August 31, 2020 at 9:37 AM
Thank you, Pangie; I truly appreciate you support. It means a lot to me. Blessings my friend! xx
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