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The System Failure

It seems we are always trying to improve – innovate; which is not the same as procreate; though the two can be combined...resulting in far fewer divorces – maybe? The problem is, trying always gets in the way: it’s simple Physics: takes energy to do motion – leaving less energy for each rising degree of devotion; till the system failure a fatal delight –

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Date: 9/22/2020 7:59:00 PM
Hey did you know this one of the most popular recent poems. You are 77 out of 100, Congrats. Pangie xxx
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Joe DiMino
Date: 9/24/2020 3:12:00 PM
I did not know that...Wow! Thank you, Pangie. xxx
Date: 9/2/2020 9:15:00 AM
You are right, but so little improve their inner selves...
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Joe DiMino
Date: 9/2/2020 9:34:00 AM
So right, my friend. Better to just do than try. Making something more complicated than need be, leads to failure. Have a great day Si!
Date: 9/1/2020 3:58:00 AM
Joe this is great. I enjoyed it :)
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Joe DiMino
Date: 9/1/2020 6:29:00 AM
Hi Heidi; thank you. Have a beautiful Day!
Date: 8/31/2020 11:55:00 AM
- ... yes, it's simple physics ... great written, Joe :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Joe DiMino
Date: 8/31/2020 8:40:00 PM
Hi Sunshine; thank you so much. Have a great evening!!
Date: 8/31/2020 7:29:00 AM
Prince de Mino...))) An insightful verse with a dash of humor. Really liked this. A FAV Panagiota
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Joe DiMino
Date: 8/31/2020 9:37:00 AM
Thank you, Pangie; I truly appreciate you support. It means a lot to me. Blessings my friend! xx