Joanna Daniel Poet Ekphrasis

The Swing

THE SWING (by Jean-Honoré Fragonard)

I swing high up in the air,
Dressed with opulence and flair,
Smiling down at my lover,
Who's glad to nearby hover,
He takes his hat in his hand,
Pointing towards my dress grand,
My left shoe, I gaily fling,
Seated above in the swing,
The 'putti' watch with envy,
As I swing under the tree,
My dog, Whitie, barks with joy,
Adventure flight, I enjoy,
Uncle manoeuvres the swing,
As I fly skywards and cling,
It's a perfect day for smiles,
Swinging high up miles and miles.


11th Feb 2023

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Sara Kendrick February 15, 2023 at 6:42 AM Back with congratulations on this winning work. Sara

Andrea Dietrich February 13, 2023 at 4:11 PM used to love this activity and not it makes me nauseous. Very nicely done in Brian's contest.

Susan Ashley February 13, 2023 at 7:52 AM Oh, how the heart can soar! Beautiful poetry, Dear Jo! Your rich vibrant imagery is enchanting and idyllic and takes me to the center of this romantic moment. Congratulations for your excellent win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Francis J Grasso February 13, 2023 at 5:12 AM Congratulations, Jo. A lovely, delightful read! ...Fran

Beata Agustin February 12, 2023 at 11:42 PM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making me nostalgic of my blissful "swinging" moments. God bless you.

Janice Canerdy February 12, 2023 at 2:02 PM CONGRATS on your win with this delightful piece, Jo. Janice

Paula Goldsmith February 12, 2023 at 12:48 PM A lovely write. You painted with words what has been painted with paints. Have a blessed/wonderful day....................

Michael Wise February 12, 2023 at 10:42 AM I love this. Your writing is very vivid, and I felt as if I was on that swing too. :)

Sara Kendrick February 11, 2023 at 9:59 AM Very descriptive of the painting so a good Ekphrasis. If for a contest, reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Sotto Poet February 11, 2023 at 6:32 AM Interesting poem, Jo. You really portrayed very well the excitement of riding the swings.

Victor Buhagiar February 11, 2023 at 2:15 AM You captured the joy of going on the swings.