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The Swing

THE SWING (by Jean-Honoré Fragonard)
I swing high up in the air, Dressed with opulence and flair, Smiling down at my lover, Who's glad to nearby hover, He takes his hat in his hand, Pointing towards my dress grand, My left shoe, I gaily fling, Seated above in the swing, The 'putti' watch with envy, As I swing under the tree, My dog, Whitie, barks with joy, Adventure flight, I enjoy, Uncle manoeuvres the swing, As I fly skywards and cling, It's a perfect day for smiles, Swinging high up miles and miles.
11th Feb 2023

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Date: 2/15/2023 6:42:00 AM
Back with congratulations on this winning work. Sara
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Date: 2/13/2023 4:11:00 PM
used to love this activity and not it makes me nauseous. Very nicely done in Brian's contest.
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Date: 2/13/2023 7:52:00 AM
Oh, how the heart can soar! Beautiful poetry, Dear Jo! Your rich vibrant imagery is enchanting and idyllic and takes me to the center of this romantic moment. Congratulations for your excellent win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 2/13/2023 5:12:00 AM
Congratulations, Jo. A lovely, delightful read! ...Fran
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Date: 2/12/2023 11:42:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making me nostalgic of my blissful "swinging" moments. God bless you.
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Date: 2/12/2023 2:02:00 PM
CONGRATS on your win with this delightful piece, Jo. Janice
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Date: 2/12/2023 12:48:00 PM
A lovely write. You painted with words what has been painted with paints. Have a blessed/wonderful day....................
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Date: 2/12/2023 10:42:00 AM
I love this. Your writing is very vivid, and I felt as if I was on that swing too. :)
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Date: 2/11/2023 9:59:00 AM
Very descriptive of the painting so a good Ekphrasis. If for a contest, reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 2/11/2023 6:32:00 AM
Interesting poem, Jo. You really portrayed very well the excitement of riding the swings.
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Date: 2/11/2023 3:43:00 AM
Hurray, I love experiencing the journey of the picture via the poem. Very well done!
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Date: 2/11/2023 2:15:00 AM
You captured the joy of going on the swings.
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