The Sweetest Girl

When as a wee gal so small
there was a friend and we play dolls
She was a little Christian girl
who opened her heart to a heathen’s world.

Christmas had come and she got cash
into her piggy she did stash
for one day in summer we’d shop
for troll dollies with carrot tops!

Not quite enough pennies or dimes
were in my purse my doll to find
so she used all the cents in hers
to get twin dollies with skirts!

Home that day, she was put to bed
Dad was mad at the money spent.
To her room went she, no tear cried
my best friend with the soft blue eyes.

*dedicated to my best childhood friend Christine Walsh
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Amuni Avatar
July 30, 2010 at 6:11 AM
Nice dedication.Christine should be be in a trance at this. Adeola Yusuf amuni
W Avatar
June 29, 2010 at 6:36 PM
Such a sweet poem, and nice to know that you still cherish your childhood memories.
Sweetheart Avatar
June 28, 2010 at 3:53 PM
Congrats Debbie on your winning poem in the Sweetheart contest with this perfect poem and awesome win... with luv from your pupil sunning in Hawaii... can u believe it???
Brown Avatar
June 27, 2010 at 10:53 AM
Congratulations Deb on your win in Tirzah Conway's contest "Sweetheart". Love, Carol
Stella Avatar
June 26, 2010 at 9:50 AM
hey deb mine is posted for your contest the 5 vows of janisim also enjoyed the read I still stay in contact with a few childhood friends but seems they do not have time these days to chit chat so guess its time for me to move on lol
K. Avatar
June 26, 2010 at 8:00 AM
These wonderful memories of your childhood friend was such a delight to read--she does sound like such a sweet girl, and you're so sweet yourself, to dedicate this to her :) Congrats on your win!! --nikko :)
Dietrich Avatar
June 25, 2010 at 8:11 PM
I remember this cute little poem. It very much deserved to be in the top ten. LUv, Andrea
Johnson Avatar
June 25, 2010 at 7:41 PM
What a sweet memory. Congratulations. Love Joyce
Conway Avatar
June 25, 2010 at 6:17 PM
Congrat's on your 10th place win in my contest!~Tirzah~
D.N Avatar
June 24, 2010 at 8:51 PM
good poem and yes i am interested in the rasta and everlife poem.
Kendrick Avatar
June 24, 2010 at 5:05 PM
Reads as though you had a great loving selfless friend...I am glad that you honored her by writing about her here..May your gifts expand like a "Spiraling Universe" and touch on the lives of many in a positive way..Sara
Blakeley Avatar
June 24, 2010 at 1:08 PM
Wow !! Did I repeat myself ...or what ? I'm on vacation using a laptop, with a mind of it's own that's my story...lol
Blakeley Avatar
June 24, 2010 at 1:04 PM
Thanks for the kind words AND advice... I like your poem. Alls. all us old ladies are cute ! ; us old ladies's are cute... That's how we get what we want...LOL ;-)
Masters Avatar
June 24, 2010 at 5:18 AM
lovely tribute....hoping you can find her again in this world...
Dietrich Avatar
June 23, 2010 at 5:29 PM
a great entry, deb. Good you thought of that 'sweet event" I still can't think of a standout one! OH, gosh, I miss those troll dolls. they just dont' make them like they used to. I remember my carrot top too!!!
Chachere Avatar
June 22, 2010 at 4:09 PM
thats really sweet(: best friends never go astray in the heart or the soul. & thats really cute. ~Always&Forever Lynette
La France Avatar
June 22, 2010 at 11:05 AM
This is so sweet, a little girl and her friend, I just loved this lovely memory.... you have soup mail... love constance
Mehta Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 6:55 PM
Nice memories recollected and nice dedication to Christine Walsh
Richards Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 5:57 PM
We never forget those moments....adults don't understand the impact, and how huge the hurt from what they may think is a trivial thing. A tender memory....I like !
A   Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 1:44 PM
A sweet dedication you wrote, enjoyed...P.D.
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