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The Sweet Scent of your Soul

You speak my name a tone that chimes so sweet,
Then gently stroke my heartstrings and you can.
You sing the song of love when our eyes meet,
I feel the music flow through you sweet man.

You take my hand and gently kiss my palm,
Then place it lovingly upon your cheek.
You know my moods, you have become my calm,
Your arm around my shoulder makes me weak.

Your love for me, it rushes through each bone,
You fill me up and make me my best whole.
I love to hear your heart beat its sweet tone,
You've shown to me, the sweet scent of your soul.

10.13.2014
Anthony Slausen’s Contest: 
The Scent of your Soul

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/16/2014 10:10:00 AM
You are truly fortunate to find such a love........a lovely dedication to one's soul mate !
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/17/2014 5:24:00 PM
Thanks Carrie.
Date: 10/15/2014 9:41:00 PM
Beautiful love song, Brenda! jimbo
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/17/2014 5:24:00 PM
Thanks James
Date: 10/15/2014 7:33:00 PM
Lovely Brenda...I really like "you have become my calm"...nicely written
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/15/2014 8:48:00 PM
Thanks David
Date: 10/15/2014 11:41:00 AM
:) your second stanza.. :) wowowoowow!! so sweeet swweeeeet!!!!
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/15/2014 12:58:00 PM
Thanks for your kind words Olive.
Date: 10/15/2014 9:48:00 AM
Simply BEAUTIFUL my friend. A very solid 7 .
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/15/2014 12:57:00 PM
Thanks so much Robert.
Date: 10/14/2014 11:57:00 PM
This is so gorgeous, dear. Great rhythm to it as well as the words. I hope you do splendidly in the contest. I saw your note to me at another poet's poem. I do not share your opinion on that person you were supporting. I have my reasons, dearie. Anyway, you just keep being the sweetheart that you are!!
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/15/2014 12:57:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, I'll try.
Date: 10/14/2014 8:01:00 PM
wow...okay...beautiful...hugs Tim
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/14/2014 10:42:00 PM
XOXO Back at ya. Thanks.
Date: 10/14/2014 6:59:00 PM
Brenda, this is such a beautifully written poem - perfect in rhythm and rhyme, and so full of love and emotion in your well-chosen words. Good luck in the contest! Sandra
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/14/2014 7:33:00 PM
Thanks for your encouraging words Sandra.
Date: 10/14/2014 2:51:00 PM
This is so very well done. The rhyme and meter r spot on and the words are so very charming.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/14/2014 3:06:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comment Charles.
Date: 10/14/2014 11:07:00 AM
I find this approach so unique and definitely sweet,brenda...well crafted if I may say!.. huggs
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/14/2014 3:06:00 PM
Thanks Nette I appreciate your complement.
Date: 10/14/2014 8:40:00 AM
Lets be practical and realistic and cut all of the BS. This poem is way above anything I could ever write. There is enough feeling in it for 50 poems combined. Not only that it is enjoyable and a pleasure to read without having a Southern accent. Not only that it is endearing, as well as being well worth reading. Jim Horn, Bolivia, NC.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/14/2014 9:56:00 AM
Oh Jim Horn from Bolivia NC, thanks for your sweet, kind comment, it's made my day.
Date: 10/14/2014 8:22:00 AM
Awwww...this is very sweet, Brenda. May the beautiful scent always bring you joy!! HUGS
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/14/2014 8:32:00 AM
Thank you Eileen.
Date: 10/14/2014 7:14:00 AM
very beautiful brenda
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/14/2014 7:55:00 AM
Thank you Liam.
Date: 10/14/2014 2:27:00 AM
Wonderfully romantic, a pleasure to read. Love your poetry.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/14/2014 7:54:00 AM
Thanks Maurice.
Date: 10/14/2014 1:03:00 AM
Beautifully romantic Brenda:-) Good luck in the contest. Hugs Jan xx
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/14/2014 7:53:00 AM
Thank you my friend.
Date: 10/14/2014 12:48:00 AM
Enjoyed this very romantic write Brenda! :) good luck in this contest my dear friend. Hugs! Love and light! xxx D.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/14/2014 7:53:00 AM
Thank you Dorian. XOXO
Date: 10/13/2014 9:31:00 PM
Very nice romantic poem. beautiful imagery.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/13/2014 9:46:00 PM
Thank you Ronnie