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The Sweet River

Foamy cream on both the banks Tempest in the river Beneath the waves we sank

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 2/21/2016 10:48:00 PM

Yet another lovely win Probir.. big congrats!

Probir Gupta
Date: 2/22/2016 12:22:00 AM

Thank you Upma...

Eve Roper

Date: 2/21/2016 9:06:00 PM

BEAUTIFUL VERSE !!Congratulations on your “River of Dreams” win , Probir! Hugs Eve

Probir Gupta
Date: 2/21/2016 9:44:00 PM

Thank you Eve, n hugs.

Probir Gupta
Date: 2/21/2016 9:44:00 PM

Thank you Eve, n hugs.

Susan Gentry

Date: 2/21/2016 7:03:00 PM

Congratulations on your win!

Probir Gupta
Date: 2/21/2016 8:06:00 PM

Thanks. Did you like it, I mean the poem?

Timothy Hicks

Date: 2/21/2016 10:35:00 AM

This poem took a scary turn ... yikes! Definitely different than other people's joyful take on the theme ... congrats on your win, Probir!

Probir Gupta
Date: 2/21/2016 11:24:00 AM

Thank you,... Scary? Well !

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/21/2016 10:26:00 AM

oh my, death on this sweet river. I enjoyed the read. Congrats for your win.

Probir Gupta
Date: 2/21/2016 11:25:00 AM

Ohh, welcome, will try for a sweeter one then, thank you...

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/21/2016 10:13:00 AM

Probir, Congratulations on your flowing win. Enjoyed the imagery. Stop by my latest blog "Oh Beautiful Dreams" if you'd like. Enjoy your wonderful win and day. ~LINDA~

Probir Gupta
Date: 2/21/2016 10:17:00 AM

Thank you. Okay..., right now..