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The Sweet Bliss of Heavens Abyss

When I’m amiss, it’s cuz' my grams I miss, she’s in the sweet bliss, of Heavens abyss. I try to promise, or never dismiss, her sweet tender kiss, as I reminisce. I’ll remember this, she’d whistle with hiss- I shall never remiss, my grams Iris. April 26, 2017

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Date: 5/3/2017 11:20:00 PM
Very sweet poem, Laura Loo, and I'm sure your "grams" would love it. Congrats on your placement in the contest.
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Date: 4/30/2017 3:00:00 PM
Hi Laura thanks for the entry, sorry for the low placement, next time avoid repetition of sounds eg miss 5x with internal rhyme different sounds are important, but you already know that!
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