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The Swan

Upon the lakes they do swim gliding so effortlessly These species of graceful waterfowl the largest of anatidae family In their beautiful pure white plumage with elegant long curved necks Blunted beaks and big webbed feet living together by water's edge These magnificent creatures of the waters are a sign of purity and love Remind us of the blessings in our relationships a gift from heaven above If all goes well in there pairing they will stay together for rest of their life’s When they glide upon the waters of our awareness they bring us deep insight These birds of Mother Nature they’re exquisite and unique Bearing exotic waves of beauty to our dreams as we do sleep They swim around in our divine mind adding colours of delight Encouraging us to spread our wings and take our glorious flight Courting occurs on rivers and lakes throughout the known world Whilst they live on plant life tiny fish and scattered bread as well You might see them duck their heads as they feed upon their foods But you better beware of their aggression whilst they protect their broods The elegance of these myterious birds are displayed in a ballet dancer Dancing into our emotions with their romantic artisticpower Transforming our souls with delightful moves bringing us into harmony With a brilliant performance of balance, control and technical flexibility The beautiful dying swan pours its heart out as death draws near Greeting this with an exceptional beautiful ending balladeer Its modulated voice singing the swan-song of death so sweet This harmonious sound can be heard as its last creative piece The crown retain the ownership to all unmarked mute swans A ceremony takes place once a year and lasts for five days long Swan upping is a tradition dated back to the twelfth century Markers row up and down the rivers paying tribute to the Queen In England they’re a protected species and owned by Her Majesty The wing spans on these wonderful birds can extent to several feet These sacred aquatic birds male and female cobs and pens Those little cygnets and swanlings on a swan lake that never ends © Copyright KC.Leake 8th December 2014 All Rights Reserved

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Date: 4/21/2015 11:46:00 AM
Thanks for sharing with us this beautiful poem. Light Poetry form seems to really work here.
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Kevin Leake
Date: 4/21/2015 2:47:00 PM
Hi Thomas, Thanks again for your wonderful comment, I appreciate you taking the time to read through this. Best Wishes Kevin
Date: 4/19/2015 7:29:00 PM
Hi Kevin, What can I add to what has already been said to you by other poets! I share their sentiments! I just can't express myself as well as they do. I also want to thank you for your kind words and encouragement to me in your comment. Arlene
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Kevin Leake
Date: 4/20/2015 12:27:00 PM
You are welcome Arlene, Thank you also for stopping by and reading. God Bless you Kevin
Date: 12/13/2014 11:53:00 AM
I enjoyed how you managed to not only give us an elegantly worded poem, but also be educational too. "When they glide upon the waters of our awareness"... so many thoughts come to mind when reading this line! You left the door partway open for our minds to ponder - great work!
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Kevin Leake
Date: 12/13/2014 1:02:00 PM
Hi Timothy, I'm so glad you enjoyed the poem and thanks for the uplifting comments. I truly appreciate them. Have a Happy Christmas Best wishes Kevin
Date: 12/9/2014 7:11:00 AM
Lovely and informative write, Kevin, in which you honour these elegant creatures. "on a swan lake that never ends" is a great way to end this poem. // paul
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Kevin Leake
Date: 12/9/2014 10:29:00 AM
Hi Paul, Thanks for taking the time to read through this, I truly appreciate your comment. Best Wishes Kevin
Date: 12/8/2014 10:34:00 PM
Really liked the symbolism Kevin..on a swan lake that never ends...nice
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Kevin Leake
Date: 12/9/2014 3:01:00 AM
Hi Tim, Thank you for visiting, I'm glad you enjoyed my poem and thank you so much for your kind comment. Take Care Kevin
Date: 12/8/2014 6:23:00 PM
There is more here then what meets the eye. There is an underlying message, thought and expression of feeling. Something has happened in your life and the swan represents that happening. God brought her into your life. Jim Horn
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Kevin Leake
Date: 12/8/2014 7:48:00 PM
Hi James, Thank you for those kind words. God has definitely brought changes in my life over time. Maybe more to come!!!!!! God Bless Kevin
Date: 12/8/2014 3:26:00 PM
This made me want to run down to the part and take a closer look -- how many times have I glazed on these wonderful birds without really seeing them -- your gift of seeing these wonderful symbolic creatures in life and dreams is precious. Well done my friend.
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Kevin Leake
Date: 12/8/2014 4:47:00 PM
Hey David, Thank you for your great uplifting comment, glad you enjoyed it. Cheers Kevin
Date: 12/8/2014 3:17:00 PM
This has to be a favourite for me.Swans and monkeys are my favourite non-human species.Mesmerizing poem!Charma.
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Kevin Leake
Date: 12/8/2014 4:41:00 PM
Hi Charma, Thank you for your beautiful comment, I really appreciated that. I'm glad you liked it. God Bless you Kevin
Date: 12/8/2014 3:07:00 PM
An absolutely delightful poem about such an elegant bird - a 7 from me:-) hugs Jan xxx
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Kevin Leake
Date: 12/8/2014 4:37:00 PM
Hi Jan, Thank you for the wonderful comment, glad you enjoyed it. Bless you Kevin

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