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The Swamp

Cattails grow up out of my muck
taking root in  the mire on my bottom

creeping along in my soft blue clay,
shooting up in long cylindrical spikes
with a velvety fruit, encouraging

red-winged black birds to nest, feed,
caw and quack, at times acting more like

a predator than prey, especially when
local toms creep around the high grass

on my banks, licking their chops, while
bogs of ancient trees decay, discoloring

stagnant water, where frogs, amphibians
and a variety of snakes find places to

burrow.  Mosquito larva slip in among
slime and weeds, sparrows hazard making

nests in stumps and reeds protruding in the air

black, green, round and mud snakes lurk
in primal anticipation

of bird brain nest strategies,

although they have a preference for siren
salamanders and small amphibians.

Submerged and floating vegetation fill my shallow
waters, where muskrats and water voles survive

in a primitive atmosphere within shouting distance
of a twenty-first century mall.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/22/2009 11:30:00 AM
Congratulations on being a first round survivor and the best to you in the finals Bill. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/21/2009 10:20:00 PM
Dear Bill,Congratulations on making it through the first round and best wishes on advancing to the finals. Lainie
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Date: 12/21/2009 2:07:00 PM
excellent choice for the contest! congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 12/21/2009 8:34:00 AM
Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/20/2009 9:50:00 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
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Date: 12/3/2009 12:16:00 PM
Many congrats on your piece being featured this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 12/1/2009 11:54:00 AM
Awesome write here, Bill!! We have a similar wetlands area outside one of our shopping malls also which now I feel I must explore ... smile ... wonderful selection to be featured this week here at the Soup. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/1/2009 4:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poem being featured this week Bill. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/30/2009 4:34:00 PM
lovely images so real and vivid! Light & Love
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Date: 11/30/2009 11:38:00 AM
Many congratulations on your poem being featured Bill >> James
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Date: 11/30/2009 9:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your feature Bill. Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 11/30/2009 5:46:00 AM
Excellente write. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A. W. www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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Date: 7/19/2009 5:54:00 AM
Great poem Bill>>James
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Date: 7/16/2009 4:48:00 PM
very interesting word picture. My brain can't hear iambic pentameter (does mean it's not there) question why did you choose to double space every other line MOST of the time? I think I like your action verbs and would continue them throughout..using them/the action as a reason for the break. See soup mail. Light & Love
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Date: 7/16/2009 3:22:00 PM
Interesting poem, God bless, Moses! WELCOME TO SOUP!
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Date: 7/16/2009 2:45:00 PM
Bill, I really am smiling at this fun, artistic poem, I love the swamp-in-the-city places too! I walk around a couple such places, you can add deer, fox, painted turtles, egrets and more to your swamp!!! jim
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