Jatin Gauttam Poet Dramatic Verse

The Sunset

The Sunset
Jatin Gauttam
August 8th, 2015


The edge of my unusual past, the place where I stood numb...
The cliff of frightening darkness that I needed to jump..
The evergreen hilltop down the town  where I'd go to see, 
This time I left my place with nothing, I had no memory...
Guessed every thing has changed for now, no sign of past...
Well here I'm standing again on that same hilltop, same sight...
Watching the beautiful Sunset, memories glided back so fast. 

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Poet Destroyer A February 20, 2016 at 10:45 PM jatin, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA Jatin Gauttam February 20, 2016 at 11:44 PM thank you for this lovely comment, Linda. :)

Andrea Dietrich August 19, 2015 at 8:48 PM beautifully nostalgic. BIG congrats in this awesome contest. Jatin Gauttam August 20, 2015 at 7:17 AM thanks a lot ma'am.

Skat A August 17, 2015 at 11:15 PM Jatin. Congratulations, on what you thought the Answer should be in less than 8 lines.... Always ~SKAT Jatin Gauttam February 20, 2016 at 11:45 PM thank you Skat... :)