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The Sunset

The Sunset Jatin Gauttam August 8th, 2015 The edge of my unusual past, the place where I stood numb... The cliff of frightening darkness that I needed to jump.. The evergreen hilltop down the town where I'd go to see, This time I left my place with nothing, I had no memory... Guessed every thing has changed for now, no sign of past... Well here I'm standing again on that same hilltop, same sight... Watching the beautiful Sunset, memories glided back so fast.

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Date: 2/20/2016 10:45:00 PM
jatin, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 2/20/2016 11:44:00 PM
thank you for this lovely comment, Linda. :)
Date: 8/19/2015 8:48:00 PM
beautifully nostalgic. BIG congrats in this awesome contest.
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Date: 8/20/2015 7:17:00 AM
thanks a lot ma'am.
Date: 8/17/2015 11:15:00 PM
Jatin. Congratulations, on what you thought the Answer should be in less than 8 lines.... Always ~SKAT
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Date: 2/20/2016 11:45:00 PM
thank you Skat... :)

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