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The Sunny Arrows

the sun ascending the big arrows in the sky the flight of the life April 30, 2018

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J.W. Earnings

Date: 5/28/2018 5:01:00 AM

Delightful and neat!

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/3/2018 2:39:00 PM

This is so neat! Amazing :)

Probir Gupta
Date: 5/4/2018 12:03:00 AM

Thank you, Heidi ..

Jean Murray

Date: 4/30/2018 5:50:00 PM

I always think of the lines in the sky the jets leave. I don't know why.

Probir Gupta
Date: 5/2/2018 5:58:00 AM

Thank you ... Can you visualize any other large arrow like symmetrically flying figure ?

Paul Callus

Date: 4/30/2018 3:03:00 PM

A captivating early morning image, Probir. A flight of arrows - a flight of life. Regards // paul

Probir Gupta
Date: 5/2/2018 6:04:00 AM

Thank you Paul ... The morning I composed the haiku I did perceive the life flying far above in the sky inside the living wings forming the shape of a beautiful arrow ... I am used to seeing this scene in the morning and evening ... it descended in the haiku that morning only ... I felt a shiver I will ever remember ... Regards ...

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/30/2018 6:30:00 AM

Lovely haiku, Probir!

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/30/2018 11:58:00 AM

Thank you, Vijay ...

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/30/2018 12:27:00 AM

:) I've always loved the sun. This poem accentuates its splendor.

Probir Gupta
Date: 5/2/2018 6:11:00 AM

Thank you Eileen ... I am honoured ...