The Sun

The early morning sky,has fog,the sun breaks through the smog.

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Marc Acrich

Date: 2/14/2018 7:29:00 AM

(: You can always go back and extend it, it's good satrt or not marc

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/14/2018 1:03:00 PM

Hello Marc, I just might do that my friend. Have a nice dasy my friend.

Milton Robertson

Date: 12/12/2017 6:11:00 PM

The beginning of a great day. May many more come your way.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/12/2017 7:55:00 PM

Hello Milton,I wish you the same my friend. Have a nice evening my friend.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 12/9/2017 10:21:00 PM

Very joyous view this poem shows, Darlene. Sun bursting thru is like dawn golden dew giving promise of a brighter day chasing the dark shadows away. Wonderful image expressed in this quaint, enjoyable poem. Love and smiles always.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/10/2017 7:23:00 AM

Hello Freddie,thank you this is how i see the sun.I like when it rains when the sun shines, then a rainbow comes out ,so beautiful to see. Have a nice day my friend,peace and love always my friend.