The Sun

the sun 
strikes a nesting  gull
just another dawn
to a human marking
the breath of the tides
yet never forgets the gull
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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La France Avatar
July 8, 2015 at 5:35 PM
Thomas, such a lovely Sedona, a beautiful 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, spiritual awarenes, it seemed to me you were missing, happy to see you back
Kendrick Avatar
July 8, 2015 at 5:24 PM
Enjoyed reading your work today..This was an interesting one..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Allison Avatar
July 8, 2015 at 4:05 PM
beautiful tanka:-) hugs Jan xx
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