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The Sun

the sun strikes a nesting gull just another dawn to a human marking the breath of the tides yet never forgets the gull

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/8/2015 5:35:00 PM
Thomas, such a lovely Sedona, a beautiful 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, spiritual awarenes, it seemed to me you were missing, happy to see you back
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Date: 7/8/2015 5:24:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work today..This was an interesting one..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 7/8/2015 4:05:00 PM
beautiful tanka:-) hugs Jan xx
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