The Sun

Unlike the Moon, clear and upfront,
a face apparent, the Sun can be
a deceiver – 

will only let itself be seen through
shades; at the edge of clouds – a malevolent
force driving the storm while stealthily 
hidden – 

Should we lose our vigil 
and sleep beneath its enticing
warmth...upon awakening, we
would know the cunning of such
treachery – though much that glitters
may be seen as golden, many
reflective qualities are of two
edges, two metals – one for defending
freedom...while the other, for savagely  
filleting....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Brewer Avatar
August 5, 2021 at 6:57 PM
Interesting allegorical observations, Joe. I think that my familiarity with your verses give me a good idea of that to which you allude. Apart from that, the words and imagery excite aesthetic appreciation. Well done, Joe.
DiMino Avatar
August 6, 2021 at 11:18 AM
Thank you, Geoffrey; seeing how you are such an excellent writer, a compliment from you on my writing means a lot to me. Blessings my friend!
Romios Avatar
July 31, 2021 at 9:22 PM
Prince de Mino. A great verse with a phenomenal message. Excellente Pangie xx
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August 1, 2021 at 2:22 AM
You are a fanclub of one for this poem -- thank you, Pangie. Keep the faith. Reply
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