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The Sun

Unlike the Moon, clear and upfront, a face apparent, the Sun can be a deceiver – will only let itself be seen through shades; at the edge of clouds – a malevolent force driving the storm while stealthily hidden – Should we lose our vigil and sleep beneath its enticing warmth...upon awakening, we would know the cunning of such treachery – though much that glitters may be seen as golden, many reflective qualities are of two edges, two metals – one for defending freedom...while the other, for savagely filleting....

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Date: 8/5/2021 6:57:00 PM
Interesting allegorical observations, Joe. I think that my familiarity with your verses give me a good idea of that to which you allude. Apart from that, the words and imagery excite aesthetic appreciation. Well done, Joe.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 8/6/2021 11:18:00 AM
Thank you, Geoffrey; seeing how you are such an excellent writer, a compliment from you on my writing means a lot to me. Blessings my friend!
Date: 7/31/2021 9:22:00 PM
Prince de Mino. A great verse with a phenomenal message. Excellente Pangie xx
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Joe Dimino
Date: 8/1/2021 2:22:00 AM
You are a fanclub of one for this poem -- thank you, Pangie. Keep the faith. Reply

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