The Sun

THE SUN sun behind the cloud drizzling going off and on rainbow trying to fade. 07/05/18

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Date: 7/9/2018 10:02:00 PM

The Sun call's me each morning to rise to its spender as I wonder who is it that keeps the sun in obedience? Love you my dear

Anisha Dutta
Date: 7/9/2018 10:54:00 PM

Sun is leading its own life. It's now middle aged. It will glow for more 500 billions of years and then will face death consuming its fuel.

Date: 7/6/2018 12:45:00 AM

Hi Anisha.. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your well crafted write this evening. I always appreciate the giftings of a pen in the hand of a poet!

Anisha Dutta
Date: 7/7/2018 9:36:00 AM

Thank you Lyric for the visit.

Date: 7/5/2018 1:00:00 PM

sweet haiku:-) hugs Jan xx

Anisha Dutta
Date: 7/7/2018 9:37:00 AM

Thank you Jan. Love.