The Sublime in Poetry

Just past 
where the world of the atom ends
there are spaces that we try to fill
or pretend they don't exist.
Hollows that harbor silence 
or an unshaped need, 
the imprint of something 
the mind can't conceive.

Music makes its way there
and knocks on the door,
takes its seat to hear
the sublime and capture
in glorious notes
what can't be said
in words. The chords
of creation sound
in the chambers of the ear.

Poetry goes there 
with its clumsy feet, trying
to fit the formless into a cage,
give beauty a face,
fumbling to shape shadows 
into three dimensional space.
And yet it is the word 
that brings things into being, 
gives each its sacred name. 
Language the blunt instrument
of the poet's art, 
the poem a sanctum
to house the holy embers
of creations spark.
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M  Avatar
April 23, 2024 at 4:40 AM
Belated POTD Congratulations Paul for another intriguing beautiful poem! I so love the way you write! Debx
Lane Avatar
April 10, 2024 at 8:02 AM
'Language the blunt instrument of the poet's art..." How often do we wish we would write with a pencil that can be sharpened instead of an ink pen, whose scribbles are permanent? What gives us impetus to create poetry? A spark, an ember of thought, glowing in the dark spaces of our mind, heart...perhaps. Our words are as notes to a musician, conceived within us and given life. Apologies and congrats, Paul for not commenting sooner on your creative potd lines... always reader and kudos worthy.
Lane Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 3:18 PM
Thank you for thinking of my paintings. ;-)
Willason Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 3:08 PM
Some profound reflections contained in yr words...thankyou Lin for reading the poem and providing such a thoughtful response. You are aiways a kind companion to my little creations as they flutter off...so appreciated.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 5:39 PM
Hollows that harbor silence… the imprint of something the mind can't conceive… The chords of creation sound in the chambers of the ear… the poet's art, the poem a sanctum to house the holy embers of creations spark…Congratualtions on POTD!
Willason Avatar
April 9, 2024 at 5:28 AM
Thankyou Kim for reading the poem and taking it in...appreciate your comments. Good to hear from you, take care, Paul
Nicole Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 5:17 PM
Words and emotions are connected, so when the time is right, a poem is born. Your thoughts are beautiful and tender, all at the same time. Congratulations Paul, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Willason Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 6:28 PM
Lovely words, Brandy...thankyou for sending them to me. There is always a secret chemistry at work in the writing of poetry...have trouble sometimes in the formulation, end up with a pleasant surprise atbtines. Take care, Paul
Calasibetta Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 12:38 PM
Congratulations on your POTD! Wonderfully crafted, "music" of poetic creativity! Paulette
Willason Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 6:21 PM
Appreciate your visit and kind words dear Paulette...thankyou. take care, Paul
Wolf Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 10:40 AM
It's nice to see the 'holy embers of creation's spark' honored so. Congrats on POTD, Paul. Excelsior! ~ Gershon
Willason Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 6:20 PM
Dear Gershon, how nice of you to pay me the honor of a second visit and for testing my latin. Thankyou my friend in poetry.
Fowler Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 9:23 AM
Just lovely Paul. Congratulations on POTD with this sublime write. :)
Willason Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 6:14 PM
Thankyou Linda...so pleased to hear from you and receive your lovely comments.
Bowring Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 9:17 AM
Dear Paul, many congratulations on POTD with this beautiful and artistic poem. It’s an apt title because all of your poetry is sublime. You have a wonderful, unique gift and it’s always a rewarding pleasure to read your work. This is thought provoking and so wonderfully expressed from a true poet’s heart. ‘ to house the holy embers of creations spark’. Sublime!
Willason Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 6:11 PM
Thankyou for such generous commentary my dear Christina. I always feel a bit of a pretender on receipt of such praise. Most of my poetry seems dictated to me...I just write it down and do a little polishing at the end. Its all quite a mystery to me and leaves me in awe of poetry and so grateful. Grateful too in having you as a reader my friend.
Baker Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 8:40 AM
Powerful and deep thoughts in your poem, Paul. Congratulations on your POTD! Enjoy your special day of recognition. Bill
Willason Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 5:55 PM
Thanks Bill for reading the poem and taking time to comment. Valued. Take care.
Lawless Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 8:40 AM
OH, you silver-tongued devil you.....no wait.....you silver tipped pen....no..no...you silver tinted keyboard Great write Paul...a gentle ode to the blunt instrument of language...
Willason Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 6:03 PM
First time I've been called silver-tongued...I do like to read my poems aloud to get the rhythms and flow right but probably the Aussie accent may be noticeable to the American ear. Thanks mate for your comments...they always come with that unmistakable Lawless humour and are much valued my friend.
Goldsmith Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 8:01 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A wonderful write. Poetry goes everywhere... Have a blessed day writing away...........
Willason Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 5:52 PM
Good to hear from you Paula...thankyou for your congratulatory note and kind words.. appreciated. Paul
Greenhough Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 7:47 AM
Congratulations on POTD. Your poem is unusual, mesmerizing, and thought provoking. Thank you for opening this new dimension of poetic beginnings.
Willason Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 5:46 PM
Wow...indeed appreciate your comments Hilda. It is encouraging to receive such feedback...do hope my poem gave reasons to explore further....poetry is a vehicle for experiencing our connection to the mystery of life. Thankyou.
Kendrick Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 7:24 AM
Paul, I really enjoyed reading your winning post. Congratulations on POTD. Way to go. I think the muse meets poets there in that space between what is seen and what is not seen. Sara K
Willason Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 5:40 PM
Such kind comments Sara...very much appreciated. I always try and leave a treat out for the muse to encourage more frequent visits...haven't quite worked out what it likes.
Kitchin Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 6:31 AM
Paul, wonderfully penned, congratulations on POTD, a well deserved honor.
Willason Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 5:32 PM
So grateful for your comments Tania...so pleased that you gave my poem some of your time. Appreciated. Take care.
Turner Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 6:25 AM
Congratulations old friend on POTD honors. I knew you were destined for greatness among your peers when I first discovered your poetry. I hope life is treating you kindly.
Willason Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 5:27 PM
I have missed you my dear friend....I owe you so much. You gave me encouragement, support and generous comment when I first came to PS. The ailments of old age slows me a little... fortunately I have managed to preserve a few brain cells capable of turning out what I hope is a decent poem now and again. Please keep in touch.
Rodgers Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 5:20 AM
Dear Paul, your poem transcends mere words, delving into the realm where the atom ends and the sublime begins. Its melody reverberates in the chambers of the ear, capturing what words fail to express. Your skillful artistry of language gives shape to the formless, crafting a sanctum for creation's spark. Congratulations on POTD; your artistry shines brightly! - Blessings, Daniel
Willason Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 5:18 PM
Thankyou, again, for such superb commentary my friend. Your kind words give valued insight into the interpretation of the poem...you always read it well. The devotion you give to poetry in the writing of it and the thoughtful interpretation of others work is exceptional my dear friend.
Cunningham Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 3:41 AM
A well composed verse Paul, well deserving of today's POTD honour. Tom
Willason Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 5:03 PM
Thankyou Tom. Pleased to hear from you, your congratulatory note most appreciated. Regards Paul
Kavanagh  Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 3:19 AM
Congratulations Paul on a most deserving POTD, The inner fabric of reality vibrates constantly, it’s up to the musicians and poets to try tap into these frequencies and tease out the lyrics, just as you do here quite exceptionally, cheers David
Willason Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 4:54 PM
Quite like your take on the fabric of reality and its vibratory nature. Thankyou David for your positive comments. I think at times writing poetry is a matter of getting out of the way to let the universe have its say or, in the manner stated, vibrate the words into existence. Take care my friend.
Andresen Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 1:59 AM
- A wonderful poem as today's p.o.t.d. ... congratulations, Paul :) -
Willason Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 4:43 PM
Good to hear from you Anne-Lise...thankyou for reading the poem and commenting. Regards, Paul
Scott Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 1:11 AM
As always, Paul, a great pleasure to see you in the Poem of the Day hall of fame. So many great lines here (as is your skill): 'give beauty a face' really cuts to the essence of poetry for me. The whole poem, in it's Introspection of our 'art' and constant 'clumsy' striving, is just a dream. One of your best, Paul. It will be frequently re-read. (fav). Blessings, Sam.
Willason Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 4:40 PM
Quite overwhelmed by your comments Sam, thankyou for such praise, feel honored. Your comments speak our shared respect for poetry, its quest to reveal the beauty and mystery of this world. Its our way, I guess, of communicating the privilege of being alive in the most elevated form of expression. Thankyou my friend for your kindness.
Edmonds  Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 12:37 AM
Your poem is certainly sublime Paul, congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Beryl
Willason Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 4:11 PM
Thankyou Beryl, indeed appreciate the time you afforded the poem in reading and providing your kind words. Regards, Paul
Wolf Avatar
April 6, 2024 at 9:22 PM
This is, indeed, a sublime write, Paul. It certainly more than lives up to its billing. The endings of the last two stanzas are extraordinary. Kudos, Gershon
Willason Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 4:06 PM
Touched by your comments Gershon. We speak the same language I think when it comes to giving poetry a privileged place in communicating the transcendent. We turn to poetry when we want to communicate with our souls. Take care dear Gershon.
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