the subject is sleeping -2-
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Poetic Form: Senryu
Inspired: 2024 September 04
Image: N/A

to lose sleep over
a person or per thing just
sleep dream best not worse
-OR-
to lose sleep over
a person or per thing then
just stay up and worry
to put one or thing
to sleep one is bored to sleep
or euthanized pets
-OR-
to put somebody
to sleep read H*'** P**'** <--told Tolstoy keep writing
verbosities yikes/writes
rocking to sleep use
back-forth-motion helps ~ OR
use real rocks ~ they'll sleep
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