The Stumble and Rise

Flaunting her flashy dress, went for the show
Careful of every step, she moved quite slow
Sadly, tripping on her skirt,
Fell flat, but feigned a show smart.
With a smile, began spinning on her toe.

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Sotto Poet

September 29, 2025 at 3:20 AM

A light-hearted poem with a touch of elegance, Valsa. Good luck in the contest!

Victor Buhagiar

September 29, 2025 at 3:18 AM

I loved this limerick. She got up from a fall as if it is part of a dance. Blessings.

sara Etgen-Baker

September 24, 2025 at 5:20 PM

humorous poem filled with a bit of grace...best wishes with this contest entry, hugs, Sara

Daniel Henry Rodgers

September 24, 2025 at 1:30 PM

Dear Valsa, It's so clever and charming! I love the story it tells, especially the way the character turns an embarrassing moment into something graceful and beautiful. It's a wonderful message about resilience and style. Blessings, Valsa, Daniel