The Stubborn Few

The laceleaf maple's crimson organs fall
and scatter on the ground like shattered glass,
as naked shadowed fingers shade the pall
and Autumn days prepare to shout their last.
Now in the forest cling the stubborn few
whose tendrils rage against the Winter wind
- die proudly at the helm of fate they knew
the promised gift that nature would rescind.
Yet like the Winter rye on fallow fields
the leaves will sleep to feed the roots of Spring,
to celebrate the births that warmth will yield
and cycle of the promised gift to bring.
   For now the Autumn winks its stratus grays
   reminding us of past November days.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Ashley Avatar
September 23, 2024 at 5:53 PM
Dear Craig, such beautiful use of the sonnet form.. a rhythmic, rhyming autumn gem. I adore the mood you’ve created and the sentiments so poetically expressed. Congratulations for your success in John’s contest. It’s a pleasure to share the podium with you. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Delaney Avatar
September 23, 2024 at 3:29 PM
Congratulations Craig on your top placement. A poem to treasure for Autumn reading. Cheers, SuZ
Lawless Avatar
September 23, 2024 at 12:45 PM
Great take on the theme Craig, smooth and vibrant just like autumn itself. Thanks for participating in the "contest"
Leiser Avatar
September 3, 2024 at 5:23 PM
Pristine poetry, Craig. Your stellar imagery sets the heart afire for cool autumn days..love this! A fave! :)
Cornish Avatar
September 5, 2024 at 4:34 PM
Thanks so much Laura - you're a gift to this site and all that you touch...and---you're writing is as well
Radice Avatar
September 3, 2024 at 11:28 AM
Once again your rhyming ticks all my boxes Craig. This is just beautiful. Simply brilliant. Thanks for sharing. Cheers - Gary
Cornish Avatar
September 3, 2024 at 3:56 PM
Thanks very much Gary
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