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The Strict Judge(Senryu)

The judges gavel banged Order in my court he roared All sound disappeared.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/26/2008 5:58:00 AM
Never want to be there. A powerful force. Vivid imagery with these few words. Love, Shar
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Date: 10/25/2008 4:14:00 PM
I been there Patricia - Never a good thing to upset a Judge - Especially if years of your life hang in the balance - Thats a lesson this knucklehead had to learn the hard way - This poem is great it took me there in a single heartbeat - God Bless
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