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The Story of the Grand Piano

She was a grand piano: grand in structure, grand in beauty, grand in quality of sound. She had captured the heart of every pianist who had come to play in the great hall. Once they touched her keys…they fell in love with the celestial sounds that resonated from her core. He was a grand musician, adept at playing several instruments. Music was what made him come to life…his passion seen in the swaying of his body as he became enraptured in the sounds. He came looking for her, having heard of her perfection, and once he touched her, he was captivated. Night after night the hall was packed with music lovers who came to hear him play, but they also came to feast their eyes for when he sat there at the piano…it was almost as if he were in the throes of passion. She made him pour and release his inner soul in notes that vibrated and pulsated within every listener’s heart. Passion redefined. His fame spread. He spent hours every day…sitting there on the stage, caressing her keys, making her do his bidding…moving her to a forte crescendo…and then another, soothing her with pianissimo after the storm of passion was spent. When did it happen? When had the restlessness taken hold? He couldn’t remember a specific moment, but at night…after the concerts were over, and he was there in his room, he would dream of traveling again, and he’d think of the Stradivarius he had seen for sale in the most renowned music store in Europe, a store right beside the grand hall. She was a beauty…sleek, streamlined, shapely, and after he had touched and fondled her, heard the noise he could bring to life with his flexible fingers, he knew…the time had come to say goodbye. All his savings and more went into purchasing that Stradivarius that fit snuggly under his chin. He could travel with her. She was…lightweight, easy to carry. She was not stationary.....heavy. It was the last concert, and he gave that piano his all. The audience sensed a difference in the man. The room was electrified with the notes of a passion in bursting from the fusion of man and instrument. The piano had never sounded so angelic, sweet, replete with every nuance of a lover’s dream. Something seemed to be tugging at the pianist's heart for before he took his bow, they saw his eyes wet with tears. Years passed, his fame grew. He was now known as the master violinist....the shining star among his contemporaries...one of a kind. He was happy and famous. He was traveling….light. His Stradivarius was his to finger and play with every night, a perfect mistress, a perfect muse, yet why…why did he find himself back in the hall after all this time? He stood there aghast, for all he could see on the stage was the old janitor, sweeping the floor. “Where is she?” he demanded. The janitor squinted at him, trying to remember, and then he gave a sad smile. “Why…didn’t you hear? It was in all the papers. After you left, something went terribly wrong with that grand piano. All the notes kept coming out wrong. It didn’t matter who sat down to play, and to tell you the truth, some of those pianists were even better than you, or so I heard said. Nothing sounded right. They brought professional tuners. Everything seemed alright, but…the music, the music lacked….life. She couldn’t get fixed and so, in the end….she was sold for scrap pieces to a carpenter who hacked her into pieces to use for firewood.” The musician stood there, tears streaming down his face. She had been heavy, her maintenance difficult, her stationary heart, unmovable. He had longed to travel light…to relish minimum maintenance demands, to travel far and wide, like a feather on the breeze…airy and light…oh, so light, but could someone be found who could explain to him the extreme leaded heaviness in his heart that rooted him, immovable, to the spot where once a beautiful grand piano had stood. Eileen Manassian

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/29/2014 10:07:00 AM
You are kind.
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Date: 9/29/2014 9:25:00 AM
In order to teach him consequences she would continue the story with Matz making the opposite decision to what Matthew suggested. I wish she had written down her stories. Hugs back to you.
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Date: 9/29/2014 10:04:00 AM
Yes, I wish I had written ALL the stories I told my little one and my niece. I'd have many children's books to my name. Your Mary is a smart woman.... Of course, she is. She chose you. :)
Date: 9/28/2014 9:13:00 AM
When our son was young Mary used to tell Matz stories our son's name is Matthew. Matz would get himself into all kinds of predicaments and Mary would ask Matthew how he would get out of the situation. It was a great way to develope his critical thinking and he just loved the stories. I enjoyed rereading this beauty and your comments again. Definately one of your best.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/28/2014 10:49:00 AM
I'm beaming, Richard. Thank you for visiting this and for sharing part of your life with me. Critical thinking is an invaluable skill. Stories do help develop that. Hugs.
Date: 8/18/2014 8:51:00 AM
Hi Eileen. God, I love a good short story, and this is one of the best I have read in a long time. This one should be published. Thank you!
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Date: 8/18/2014 8:54:00 AM
Oh...JR...Thank you for that wonderful accolade. Where? Where should I try to publish it. You have no idea how I would LOVE to have something published! I have something published in the book of a fellow poet here on the SOUP. I wrote a poem using Suzette Prime...The topic is The Classical Argument for Love. You can find it here if you get the chance. It is based on Pathos, Ethos, and Logos. One of my best. I dream of being a published poetess. Thanks for the vote of confidence.
Date: 8/17/2014 8:31:00 PM
Applause Applause Applause for you, my lovely instrument of heart tremble cause. I feel and know the moral in this melodic melancholy Eileen, an Artist only finds one perfect Muse in a lifetime. Sometimes they seperate, but something always remains, along with they're great work. A masterful weave of beauty and tragedy, Mmmm....it good! J.A.B
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/17/2014 11:39:00 PM
Justin....this was hard to write. I put my heart into it. I wanted it to come out just right. I'm glad you liked it. I'm glad you so often validate me as a poet. Your visits are always welcome and looked forward to. Thank you for being who you are....a poet warrior.
Date: 8/17/2014 11:41:00 AM
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/17/2014 11:41:00 AM
:) Kala! Bravo!
Date: 8/17/2014 9:51:00 AM
How I love a good sad story. There is not always a happy ever after ending. Just a moral here. Enjoy what you have, for one day it will cease to be, and become a memory. Sad or happy , you have to choose. Love it. God Bless. D.
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Date: 8/17/2014 9:52:00 AM
:) Thanks, Dave. Yes, this story does have a moral...and you hit the nail on the head with your analysis. Thanks for the visit. Efkharisto poli!
Date: 8/17/2014 9:15:00 AM
Yes it is sad but it is so moving and powerful. Stanza nine literally gave me chills. You breathed a soul into this work of art. I put this into my favorites right away. For me I think this may be one of your greatest creations. It is literally that good!
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Date: 8/17/2014 9:19:00 AM
Then it was worth the tears of sharing! Thank you, Richard. :) I'm smiling now. I'm glad it's tucked away safely in your favorite poem folder. It's a rather long piece, and only those who really like my work will bother to read it. On a happier note...I love telling stories to my niece, Chloe...When she was younger and when I got the chance to put her to bed, I'd tell her stories in which she played a key role....Tailor made to fit her life. If I had collected all those stories...could have a great children's book out by now. Songs as well.... ;) Hugs
Date: 8/17/2014 8:29:00 AM
This is a trancendent piece of writing, there are not enough sevens to describe how much I love this piece. This should be published. I would send a copy of this to any poetic publication you can, it should be read by everyone. I am truly in Awe Eileen. What more can I say.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/17/2014 8:31:00 AM
Richard....it's such a sad piece. My eyes are filling up. It's a sad piece, Richard, but thanks for the post and your confidence in me. Hey...Drake's show is on tonight! Can you call in? I'm going to try to!! Hugs
Date: 8/17/2014 7:26:00 AM
I am not just being nice. I sincerely feel this is great and wortty of being seen by all.....Tim
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/17/2014 7:27:00 AM
Thanks, Tim. That means a lot to me.
Date: 8/17/2014 7:19:00 AM
Simply stunning Eileen... Great use of imagery and personification..... I love it....A truly remarkable piece of poetry, the best I have read in quite a while....hugs. Tim
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/17/2014 7:21:00 AM
Bet you say that to all the girls, Tim! ;) Thanks, dear...for passing by. Your comment is sweet.
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Date: 8/17/2014 7:21:00 AM
I am faving it as well and it didn't seem long at all
Date: 8/17/2014 7:13:00 AM
Wow Eileen u hv such a tremendous pen, gracious superb write that touched my heart! Hv a blessed day!
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Date: 8/17/2014 7:14:00 AM
You read through this LONG write! :) Wow...thank you! You are sweet! It's been sitting on my heart for a while. I started and stopped, and today I let it see the light of day. Hugs

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