The Storm Watcher

He sat in his living room
And cast an apprehensive look
At the window
Pounded by the fury
Of the storm outside
The elements had gone mad
An unexpected storm
Had blown in
Out of nowhere

He didn't like storms
They reminded him of feeling unsafe
Even though he was being held by his mother
Oh, she tried to comfort him
When the thunder crashed
And the lightening flashed
She’d put on a brave face
And she'd hold him near
But he could feel her body trembling
And his hair getting wet from her tears 
                         
Only when he was older
Did he truly understand
The depth of her irrational fears
Her unstable mind
The storms reminded him
Of the storms within her
That had raged furiously
With no letting up
Until they’d found her
Sprawled on the bed
The empty sleeping pill container
A paper weight for her note
“Forgive me…I can’t stand the storms anymore”

He walked to his window
And peered out
He took a second look
There was a young woman
Battling the elements
Her raincoat whipping about
in the gusty wind
Her long black hair 
Plastered to her face and shoulders
Soaked by the rain
that her umbrella was unable to keep out

Who would be crazy enough
To be out in this weather?

Her books scattered 
And as she bent to pick them up
She slipped and fell
The umbrella blew away
And she was left
A heap on the road
In the grips of the storm

He wanted to help
He wanted to go out there
To get her to shelter
But he was furious
How crazy was she to be in that hopeless mess?
Didn't she know better?
He saw her struggle to get up
Damn…he’d have to go help her

He rushed out of the house
Running to where she lay
Before he could reach her
A car pulled up and a young man bounced out...
Collecting all her scattered things
With one one quick motion
He then scooped her up into his arms
And rushed her to the car

He stood there in the pouring rain
As they drove away
The lighting forked in the horizon
The thunder crashed and boomed
He turned his face up to the sky
The dead thing in him moved, took a breath
As the pain and hurt washed away with the rain

He had stepped into the storm
And for the first time
In many a year
He felt truly alive.

Eileen Manassian Ghali
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 5/24/2013 6:34:00 PM
How the storm fascinates, With the show she creates. Interesting, wonder where you got the idea for this lol. This a rare mix of emotions, I have no idea who to be happy for lol. In a way I suppose they are all winners brought together through the storm, you. Excellent write.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/25/2013 6:11:00 AM
Inspiration strikes at the oddest of times and in the strangest of ways....I guess you could say like LIGHTNING! ;) I will leave you to wonder, my dear. Storm watchers do need some help....sometimes...it is good to get good and soaked!
Date: 5/17/2013 4:51:00 PM
What a strong scene!!! I adore storms... I guess they speak my inner feelings... kind of, they resemble human's anger.... a most needed manifestation!! Eileen... this is truly a superb write. I have enjoyed it a lot!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/18/2013 6:52:00 PM
Why thank you, my dear friend. I'm so touched that you have taken the time to read my work and to post! :) Only a good and loyal friend would do that. Hugs!
Date: 5/16/2013 9:53:00 PM
Yes helping others , forgetting our problems a while does bring back that sense of worth...great job girl....MD
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/18/2013 6:53:00 PM
Thanks, my dear sweet MD. Love hearing for you!
Date: 5/16/2013 9:27:00 PM
You never cease to amaze me with your artistry, extrordinary piece!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/18/2013 6:51:00 PM
Thank you, Richard. I'm glad that you enjoyed this piece. :)
Date: 5/16/2013 12:09:00 PM
- A "storming" poem / story Eileen, deep feelings and very well written! - I have deep respect for the power of nature - such a storm can lead to extensive damage. - Have a nice afternoon Eileen. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/16/2013 12:22:00 PM
:) Thanks, my dear. I am happy that you took the time to read and comment on this. Hugs!
Date: 5/16/2013 8:27:00 AM
What a rush. This read was a roller coaster ride that I actually didn't get motion sickness from. :) Strong ending!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/16/2013 12:23:00 PM
Thank you, my dear. You have such a way of stating things...I'm smiling! :)
Date: 5/15/2013 10:55:00 PM
Such a captivating story, Eileen! I can honestly say I had no idea where it was heading and was pleasantly surprised by the unorthodox ending. I thought they'd run away together into a happily ever after... but instead the man simply got a taste of what it felt like to go out of your way... into the storm. One of the most unique stories I've ever read about storms... going to my faves!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/15/2013 11:17:00 PM
Overly EMOTIONAL. I really need to proofread. I'm very fast at typing. In fact, people are often amazed at how fast my fingers fly. I was once taking notes at a conference, and I was giving my input and looking around while typing and this guy stops commenting and looks at me, "Are you playing there, or are you actually taking notes!" Problem is...my fingers fly as fast as my thoughts, and then I need to remember to slow down and proofread! ;)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/15/2013 11:15:00 PM
What an honor...thanks, my dear. There is deeper meaning in this than meets the eye. I'm talking about people who don't like to invent their time and emotions into a person who is dealing with a mental illness or who is overly emotion. They fear getting hurt...but these people, though they have very low lows...their highs are worth the wait. Oh well, can't expect everyone to be able to deal with stormy people! ;) Can you?
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/15/2013 11:15:00 PM
GRRRRR.....invest..INVEST their time
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