The Storm - a Pantoum

Impatient winds shriek loud with anguished cries,
     Sunlight giving way to dark tempest’s gain.
     Silver light streaking across darkened skies,
     Squalls blowing against door and window pain.

     Sunlight giving way to dark tempest’s gain,
     Driven rain splashes into flooded pools.
     Squalls blowing against door and window pain,
     Gail tossed trees bend beneath the weather’s rule.

     Driven rain splashes into flooded pools,
     Chill hail clattering from storm tormented skies.
     Gail tossed trees bend beneath the weather’s rule,
     Impatient winds shriek loud with anguished cries.

     Adapted from my Sonnet 'The Storm', 08/12/16

     Barry Stebbings
     12/10/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Roper Avatar
December 14, 2019 at 5:46 PM
Love the poem, Barry, enjoyed reading.. Hugs Eve
Stebbings Avatar
December 15, 2019 at 6:50 AM
Thank you very much, Eve. // Barry
Sands Avatar
December 10, 2019 at 2:22 PM
Well written Barry! :)
Stebbings Avatar
December 10, 2019 at 3:45 PM
Thank you very much, Heidi. // Barry
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December 10, 2019 at 3:45 PM
Thank you very much, Heidi. // Barry
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