The Storm

She is the storm, whirling with wailing wind,
drifting in clouds of darkness,
veiled in flashes of angst.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/27/2023 2:55:00 PM

I like this one. It is very descriptive and expressive. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 10/27/2023 11:03:00 AM

oh wow love it hugs Shadow

Daisy Meadows

Date: 10/24/2023 12:19:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD. Well done.

Robert Schatz

Date: 10/23/2023 10:01:00 PM

Congrats on POTD Ink Empress! You really pack a punch in such a short poem.

Ink Empress
Date: 10/23/2023 10:46:00 PM

Thank you so very much truly

Eve Roper

Date: 10/23/2023 7:51:00 PM

Great Kimo, the imagery and feeling well sculptured. Congratulations on POTD.

Ink Empress
Date: 10/23/2023 10:46:00 PM

Ah thank you so much eve so grateful for your support

Susan Lawrence

Date: 10/23/2023 6:15:00 PM

One becomes her in your powerful emotional words dear Ink ! The immersive experience is encompassing. Hugs and congratulations on your poignant POTD . Susan :)

Ink Empress
Date: 10/23/2023 10:46:00 PM

Ah thank you so much so good to hear from you as always: appreciate your well wishes

Paige Hind

Date: 10/23/2023 5:01:00 PM

"She is the wailing wind"- so much said.

Ink Empress
Date: 10/23/2023 10:45:00 PM

Awwn thank u sweet soul

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 10/23/2023 4:11:00 PM

Congratulatiions on POTD Empress……beware when a woman gets mad…lol. Nice Kimo to capture a mood. Love, SuZ

Ink Empress
Date: 10/23/2023 10:31:00 PM

Haha so true!! You are so cute, thank you so very much truly

Brandy Nicole

Date: 10/23/2023 1:20:00 PM

A storm will brew, if wild wind and twisting clouds of distress are held deep inside. A terrifying tornado is about to pass through. This is powerful, holding many emotions. Congratulations Ink Empress, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy

Ink Empress
Date: 10/23/2023 10:25:00 PM

Thank you so very much for feeling my words. You’ve said it all so right. So grateful for your kind support and well wishes

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/23/2023 11:36:00 AM

Sheer genius - so much in so few words. Exemplary Inky! Congratulations on POTD! :)

Ink Empress
Date: 10/23/2023 10:23:00 PM

Ahh thank you so much for your kindness always grateful

Panagiota Romios

Date: 10/23/2023 11:08:00 AM

Ink! What fabulous news!!! You have been a warm supporter of mine. so I really celebrate this day with you. An outstanding Kimo, my friend! Congratulations, thrice..plus champagne! Luv,Pangiexx

Ink Empress
Date: 10/23/2023 10:23:00 PM

This is so very kind of you, thank you so much for your warm and lovely wishes so grateful

Silent One

Date: 10/23/2023 11:03:00 AM

Damn sounds so scary... God help the guy who is in a relationship with her... I know you will be disappointed in a short form being POTD for you, but its done very well and is descriptive.. Congratulations dear..

Ink Empress
Date: 10/23/2023 10:22:00 PM

Hahah yes one can only imagine. Yes a bit shy lolol i was like omg . But im happy that everyone thinks its nice enough. Thank you always for being so supportive

Jim Slaughter

Date: 10/23/2023 10:42:00 AM

I've often wondered why storms are always referred to as "she"...hmmm. I'm not familiar with this form, but I like it. Congrats on POTD, as well.

Ink Empress
Date: 10/23/2023 10:21:00 PM

Haha ahh are they? That makes me think so too now. Thank you so much for your well wishes

Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/23/2023 10:28:00 AM

Greetings Inky! Congratulations on your well deserved POTD! This whirls and flashes with the dynamic movement and gyrations of angst itself - in the whirlpool of emotions! I am so happy to see you receive this honor! Enjoy! Blessings to you!

Ink Empress
Date: 10/23/2023 10:20:00 PM

Awwn sam so good hear from you always, you are such a warm presence. Thank you for all your support truly. Grateful

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 10/23/2023 10:25:00 AM

Very beautiful, congratulations on potd!

Ink Empress
Date: 10/23/2023 10:19:00 PM

Thank you so much

I Am Anaya

Date: 10/23/2023 10:23:00 AM

Ink, xoxo. The Kimo was invented in Israel, interesting, just saying. Wow, she is the storm, powerful. You have a golden touch. Congratulations on your POTD Ink Empress! :D I Am Anaya

Ink Empress
Date: 10/23/2023 10:19:00 PM

Awwn thank you Anaya, hmm yes i knew that, but i didnt think too much about the origin. I did this for a kimo prompt on instagram, and posted here too. Appreciate always your sweet support

Arlo Parker

Date: 10/23/2023 10:23:00 AM

Cool form; great result! POTD 2 b shur. :o)

Ink Empress
Date: 10/23/2023 10:17:00 PM

Thank you so much

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/23/2023 8:51:00 AM

Congratulations on achieving a POTD. Blesings

Ink Empress
Date: 10/23/2023 10:17:00 PM

Thank you so much Victor will visit your page soon too appreciate your blessings

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 10/23/2023 8:31:00 AM

Congratulations, Dear Poet, on your poem receiving honour of POTD. The description of storm with excellent choice of words and images is superb! Keep writing such great poems, Dear Ink. Love ~ Mala

Ink Empress
Date: 10/23/2023 10:16:00 PM

Thank you so much dear Mala, truly grateful for your support

Len Gasun

Date: 10/23/2023 8:24:00 AM

Very creative kimo with great metaphors my dear poet friend. Congratulations on your well-deserved POTD and this superb write! Thanks for sharing. Blessings to you always and your writings. Hugs

Ink Empress
Date: 10/23/2023 10:13:00 PM

Awwn thank you so much for your kindness truly, i appreciate your support and well wishes

Bill Baker

Date: 10/23/2023 8:22:00 AM

A beautiful depiction of a storm, Ink Empress. I especially like the closing line, "veiled in flashes of angst." Congratulations on your POTD, my friend. Enjoy your special day of recognition. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Ink Empress
Date: 10/23/2023 10:12:00 PM

Thank you so much Bill for always being so supportive , i appreciate you and sara always