The Stoic

Whispers of wild winds increase their fury.
I stare steadily towards the edge of the horizon.
My heart is indifferent, no mercy, no ease.
I breathe only the surrounding loneliness.

Up on the hill, the cemetery tolls its dirge.
I care not, as I feel neither sorrow nor joy.
It seems like waves crushing on the salty rocks.
I care not about the amplitude of force
That should fill my heart with grief or happiness.
I feel unmoved.  Let the hills echo their tolls.

My heart is tepid, with neither chill nor heat,
No ice or fire can affect the innards of my soul.
I live as if only the moment counts and that’s enough.

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Bayles Avatar
September 22, 2026 at 7:13 AM
Great ending, Victor.
Goldsmith Avatar
August 20, 2026 at 3:50 PM
WOW!!! What a wonderful write you have here. Love It..... Get well real fast... Have a blessed day writing away..........
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 8, 2026 at 4:15 PM
you captured the essence of stoicism....not being overeactive yet appreciating the spontoneity of the moment
George Avatar
August 6, 2026 at 10:35 PM
Sometimes we move to such a state. Can we call it inertia or doldrum? If it is stoicism, it is good. If we can keep away from reacting impulsively, it is a great quality. Great poem too.
Sharma  Avatar
August 6, 2026 at 2:10 AM
Sigh being the stoic! What I've witnessed is being numb, drowning in grief to the extent when nothing can affect anymore..but being stoic is absolutely different! When we never let emotions take control and just be in the moment.. not letting people's opinions affect us in any way, not even our own thoughts.. you've inked a very heartfelt and intriguing piece dear Victor! Very evocative.. sending you light and best wishes always ~ pleasure reading. ✨🐚🕊️🌙🕊️🐚✨
Buehler Avatar
August 4, 2026 at 5:33 PM
Your interesting, wonderfully written poem portrays the stoic's personality quite well, Victor. It's nice to be strong enough for life's challenges. I love the way wild nature was employed in depicting the stoic. ❤️😄
May Avatar
August 4, 2026 at 5:16 AM
An intriguing write, best wishes
DiMino Avatar
August 4, 2026 at 5:03 AM
Indeed, find and live in the eternal moment of our choosing. Master of self and reality. Deep message. Much to ponder.
Kendrick Avatar
August 4, 2026 at 5:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this one, Victor. Well, it could be depression or just a depressive work. Very creative though. Thank you for sharing. Way to go. 👍 Sara K.
Smith  Avatar
August 4, 2026 at 3:47 AM
I would like to be more stoic - my emotions control me. Loved the imagery you used to describe a stoic person.
Andresen Avatar
August 4, 2026 at 2:26 AM
- A deep poem - One must be the blacksmith of one's own joy, Victor - It's not about surviving... it's about living :) - hugs
Edmonds  Avatar
August 4, 2026 at 2:07 AM
Dear Victor, it’s understandable how it is for the stoic, yet every moment counts as it should, message understood… Beryl
Anaya Avatar
August 4, 2026 at 1:53 AM
Each moment counts, we'll be remembered on how we react in the moment, and not necessarily the whole journey. It had me in goosebumps. Glad you pinned this one❤️
Daniel Avatar
August 4, 2026 at 1:14 AM
Description of a stoic is very apt and the imagery is superb, Victor😊
Cunningham Avatar
August 4, 2026 at 12:05 AM
Earth wind and fire doesn't move them, it amazes me how some remain calm in such situations. Tom
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