Moonbee Canady Poet Light Verse

The Stick Pin

The Pressure of A Pin ...
Is That Its Outside - It Wants In

The Pressure of A Friend ...
If They're Outside - They Want In

The Pressure of The Wind ...
Its Outside - It Wants In 

The Pressure To Be Thin ...
Outside The Crowd - You Want In

The Pressure Just To Win ...
Show The World - It Burns Within

The Pressure of All Men ...
... Com' On Girls - Don't Pretend!

& Read The Pressure of This Grin
& Let It Out - If Its In


                Written & Copyrighted ©:  9/12/2013 
                 by:  MoonBee Canady

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James Marshall Goff September 14, 2013 at 11:01 PM The workout of this concept "want in" is fully discovered in your genius mind! jimbo Moonbee Canady September 15, 2013 at 1:58 PM ha ha ... Jimmy, I was in a moronic day that day - my sister had to lock me away from her to keep me from spouting inanities ... but I'm gonna tell her, I got a vote of confidence & a certificate of sanity from Jimbo hahaha ... Much peace today to you ... MoonBee