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The Stars Aligned That Night

The way our hands explored, the thrill we felt Our eyes were glazed, our hearts so wildly throbbed The chill outside, our eager mouths did melt A prelude to romance, sheer passion robbed We fled the streets, abandoning all grace Shedding inhibitions, with immodest grins Then tumbled into bed, locked in a tight embrace Our hands a-tremble, worshiping pale skin... The stars aligned that night, their vast array They sparkled and they flickered, brilliant flames The moon shone bright, did silhouette our play The Heavens beamed, our tryst they did proclaim O cruel morn, too early have you come To shine your light on love, to strike it dumb

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 8/21/2019 12:37:00 AM
What a night! Wow! A night to remember, and you have, in this glorious poem!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/21/2019 9:12:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words, Caren! :) gw
Date: 8/20/2019 4:54:00 PM
This is amazing Gershon! Well done :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/20/2019 7:10:00 PM
Almost as amazing as the beautiful lyrical collaboration of yours that I viewed and listened to today. Thank you so much, Heidi. :) gw
Date: 8/20/2019 8:51:00 AM
This write is impeccable Gershon, loved the imagery and phrasing, much effort is evident in this write, very romantic, I see Chris Green approves, good enough for me!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/20/2019 12:01:00 PM
Greatly appreciate your kind words and support for this sonnet, John. Best wishes, gw
Date: 8/20/2019 7:34:00 AM
Wow, there's a romantic on the loose around here. This was gorgeous, the entire feel of the poem was alluring and filled with love and desire.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/20/2019 8:40:00 AM
It takes a romantic to know a romantic, Chris... Whenever I set out to pen something in the romantic vein, I think of your poems, and often review several, as your work inspires me. Thank you for your kind words and your support. Much appreciated. Warm wishes always, Gershon
Date: 8/20/2019 5:31:00 AM
This is a gorgeous sonnet my friend so many beautiful images, your word choices set this soaring. Love it :) hugs
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/20/2019 8:38:00 AM
I labor with this form, so to read such a nice comment, especially from someone who is a true wordsmith, is doubly encouraging. Than you so much, Sandy. Warm wishes, Gershon

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