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The Star

The time came Having Entered an agreement She Traveled All the way to Bethlehem Redemeer was born

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/14/2009 8:12:00 AM
Interesting take on the event and the star that guided her there. I also love how the star can probably reference the redeemer. May want to change 'Redeemer' but otherwise this drives the message home nicely. -Yoni
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