The Splashing River

The river
When we met 
Was splashing 
Both the banks


I was 
A little nervous

I wanted to swim
In case I sank?

The other day
There was a report
In the newspaper
As he was ardently fondling
The pulsating blonde neck and throat
In a prolonged prelude
Splashing the crushing waves
From the climbing passion
She died of asphyxiation

The rippling sound
Crippling crests
Suggesting silhouettes
Engaging my pen
With vignettes
While eyes focused
At the waves
Gently swashing against the shore
Knocked on the door
Making me forget 
The after and before

Are you crazy
A voice out of the mist
Called out
The luxurious river 
Is in full tide this evening
Come away

The splashy call
However, was louder
Resembling an ocean
Too gorgeous to stop
The blueberry emotions

Looking at
The currents hitting the anchor
Waters lapping the land
The blue water darkening in twilight
I waited with the key
The lock was restive
As I splashed my thoughts

Many a leaf fell from the tree
Quite a few, however, were stubborn

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4 June 2020

Splash Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Kai Michael Neumann
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 6/7/2020 11:16:00 AM
A most creative take on this contest prompt, Probir. I savor it from a metaphorical point of view. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 6/7/2020 11:28:00 PM
Thank you very much, Paul ... I am glad you savored the metaphorical flavour ... Regards ... Probir
Date: 6/4/2020 3:56:00 AM
Your poetry is always unique. This one contains a bit of mystery. Brilliant my friend! He will love it! Blessings xxoo
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/4/2020 7:14:00 PM
I am glad, Connie that you read my poem ... Thank you so much, dear friend ...
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