Paula Goldsmith Poet Rhyme

The Space Between Stars Is Not Empty

As I sit here upon this full moon,
it is October not hot June.
The comets whiz by playing a happy tune,
they make me want to swoon.
 
The space between stars is not empty hooray,
it is filled with colors of blue and gray.
I love to watch by night and by day,
being filled with both the moon and sun spray. 

I see this pretty space beltway,
the shinning diamond stars have much to say.
Each star has a roll to play,
out here in this pretty space buffet.

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Daisy Meadows December 23, 2024 at 12:54 AM A lovely, cheerful poem! Well done! Paula Goldsmith December 23, 2024 at 7:20 AM Thank You for your support. Glad you found my "Space Between Stars" to be A lovely, cheerful poem. I love to watch the sky by night/by day. Have a blessed night watching the shinning diamond stars................

Panagiota Romios November 12, 2024 at 10:03 PM Golly I want to join you on the moon What a great poem, Paula Pangie with hugs! Paula Goldsmith November 13, 2024 at 1:02 PM Thank You for your support. Glad you found my "Space Between Stars" to be a great poem. Oh yes, join me on the moon where we can watch to sky. Hugs.....  I love to watch the sky by night/by day. Have a blessed night watching the shinning diamond stars................

Crystol Woods November 8, 2024 at 10:14 AM Oh Paula your mind is a beautiful place! You spread joy and sunshine with all you write! Love this! Xo Paula Goldsmith November 8, 2024 at 12:30 PM Thank You for your support. Glad you love my "Space Between Stars" Rhyme write. I could see myself sitting on a full moon watching the sky. That would be fun... Have a blessed night watching the shinning diamond stars..............

Valsa George October 29, 2024 at 4:56 AM Hi dear Paula, enjoyed this beautifully rhyming poem. Congratulations on The Honorable Mention you got in Dilly's contest. Paula Goldsmith October 31, 2024 at 9:39 AM Thank You for your support and for your Congratulations. Glad you found my "Space Between Stars" to be a beautifully rhyming poem. I love to watch the sky by night/by day. Have a blessed night watching the shinning diamond stars................

Paula Goldsmith October 28, 2024 at 9:21 AM "Honorable Mention" The Space Between Stars Is Not Empty~Date Written:10/24/2024

thriveni c mysore October 27, 2024 at 8:39 PM 'The space between stars is not empty hooray, it is filled with colors of blue and gray' so much sweetness in honest lines dear poet. I love your poetry, elegant write. congratulations on your win. +FAV for me. Paula Goldsmith October 28, 2024 at 9:30 AM Thank You for your support and for your Congratulations. Glad you love my "Space Between Stars" Rhyme write. I see FAV??? Thanks... You made my day very happy. Have a blessed night watching the shinning diamond stars...............

I Am Anaya October 27, 2024 at 3:00 PM Congratulations on an honorable mention, Paula! Beautifully rhymed ~ Paula Goldsmith October 28, 2024 at 9:27 AM Thank You for your support and for your Congratulations. Glad you found my "Space Between Stars" to be Beautifully rhymed. It was fun to bring this one to life. Have a blessed night watching the shinning diamond stars................

Victor Buhagiar October 27, 2024 at 9:03 AM Sometimes, we encounter some meteor shower. It is always spectacular. Paula Goldsmith October 28, 2024 at 9:25 AM Thank You for your support. Glad you enjoyed my "Space Between Stars" write. Meteor showers are fun to see but they do not happen too often. Yes, they are really spectacular. Have a blessed night watching the shinning diamond stars...............

Hilda Greenhough October 26, 2024 at 7:10 PM A beautiful poem. I like the newness of astronomy woven into the romance of the night sky. Some of those stars are shining on your poem. Paula Goldsmith October 27, 2024 at 8:41 AM Thank You for your support. Glad you enjoyed my "Space Between Stars" write. I love the pretty space buffet by night or by day. Have a blessed night watching the shinning diamond stars...............

Michael Tor October 26, 2024 at 8:08 AM Paula after reading this one I can't wait till tonight to see the beautiful buffet of stars. Thanks for posting and like you always ask of me. "Keep on writing." Paula Goldsmith October 26, 2024 at 8:30 AM Thank You for your support. Glad you enjoyed my "Space Between Stars" write. Oh yes, the pretty space buffet will be out tonight to enjoy. Also enjoy the pretty day with many pretty colors. Keep Writing On.... Have a blessed night watching the shinning diamond stars................

Andrea Dietrich October 26, 2024 at 1:25 AM Cute poem, Paula . Great rhyming Paula Goldsmith October 26, 2024 at 8:02 AM Thank You for your support. Glad you found my "Space Between Stars" to be a Cute poem/Great rhyming. I enjoyed writing this fun one about the sky. Have a blessed night watching the shinning diamond stars................

David Kavanagh October 25, 2024 at 2:53 PM Yes it is a pretty space buffet for our senses Paula, and each star has a role to play in the bigger picture of the cosmos, A very pretty picture you paint for us here , all the best in contest, cheers David Paula Goldsmith October 26, 2024 at 8:00 AM Thank You for your support and for all the best wishes in the contest. Glad you enjoyed my "Space Between Stars" write. Oh yes, the pretty space buffet is for our senses to enjoy both day/night. Cheers to you.... Have a blessed night watching the shinning diamond stars................

Jay Narain October 25, 2024 at 11:31 AM colorful poem depicting our cosmos. best wishes in contest. Paula Goldsmith October 26, 2024 at 7:55 AM Thank You for your support and for your best wishes in the contest. Glad you found my "Space Between Stars" to be a colorful poem. It was so much fun to write... Have a blessed night watching the shinning diamond stars................

Sam Kauffman October 25, 2024 at 11:08 AM Love your "space buffet" with its delightful entrees, Paula! So clever and so serene. Best wishes for the contest! Blessings! Paula Goldsmith October 26, 2024 at 7:53 AM Thank You for your support and for your Best wishes for the contest. Glad you found my "Space Between Stars" to be So clever and so serene. I enjoyed writing this fun one with the "space buffet" for all to enjoy. Have a blessed night watching the shinning diamond stars................

Kim Rodrigues October 25, 2024 at 10:58 AM Pretty colors in your pretty space buffet! Paula Goldsmith October 26, 2024 at 7:49 AM Thank You for your support. Glad you enjoyed my "Space Between Stars" write. Oh yes, the sky is filled with pretty colors both day/night... Have a blessed night watching the shinning diamond stars................

Joseph P. DiMino October 25, 2024 at 5:41 AM Indeed! An infinite Space Buffet. Love it! Paula Goldsmith October 25, 2024 at 8:59 AM Thank You for your support. Glad you Love my "Space Between Stars" write. The shinning diamond stars go to a wonderful nightly space buffet. Hahaha!!! Have a blessed night watching the shinning diamond stars................

Ink Empress October 25, 2024 at 1:01 AM Dear Paula, this is another one of your sweet and beautiful poems, i agree every star feels like they have a role to play, and is very inspiring: I absolutely love the flow of your poem and brilliant rhymes: pleasure always reading your work: sending you light always Paula Goldsmith October 25, 2024 at 8:55 AM Thank You for your support and for your very kind words. Glad you enjoyed my "Space Between Stars" write. It was so much fun to bring to life. Have a blessed night watching the shinning diamond stars................

Karen Croft October 24, 2024 at 10:38 PM Loved your poem. Good luck in the contest. Paula Goldsmith October 25, 2024 at 8:51 AM Thank You for your support and for your Good luck in the contest. Glad you Love my "Space Between Stars" write. I Loved writing this fun one. Have a blessed night watching the shinning diamond stars................

Evelyn Judy Buehler October 24, 2024 at 5:56 PM It's nice to be sitting pretty, and enjoying such a view! I relished this poem's fascinating scenario. It's a fave for me. Paula Goldsmith October 25, 2024 at 8:49 AM Thank You for your support. Glad you enjoyed my "Space Between Stars" write. I see FAV??? Thanks... You made my day a very happy one. Have a blessed night watching the shinning diamond stars................

Beryl Edmonds October 24, 2024 at 2:29 PM Love this poem Paula, “a pretty space buffet“ that’s so good… Beryl Paula Goldsmith October 25, 2024 at 8:48 AM Thank You for your support. Glad you Love my "Space Between Stars" write. The stars go to the nightly pretty space buffet. Hahaha!!! Have a blessed night watching the shinning diamond stars................

Silent One October 24, 2024 at 12:44 PM A star lit poem my friend... lovely imagery and awesome take on the contest dear.. Paula Goldsmith October 25, 2024 at 8:44 AM Thank You for your support. Glad you found my "Space Between Stars" to be A star lit poem. I enjoyed writing this one. Have a blessed night watching the shinning diamond stars................

Paula Goldsmith October 24, 2024 at 12:40 PM The Space Between Stars Is Not Empty~Date Written:10/24/2024~Human Written By Poet