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The Sounds of My Everyday World

Listen! Do you hear? The trampoline springs when you jump creak like a baby crying softly. Do you hear? The bars are silent when you do a skill; but if you miss, the bar rings like a telephone. Do you hear? The beam when you land a trick thuds like a book being dropped. Do you hear? the floor when you dance croaks like frogs. Do you hear? The vault runway when you sprint sounds like pitter-patter, pitter-patter. Aunika Alch Age 11

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Date: 5/21/2013 12:45:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 5/21/2013 1:21:00 AM
Many congratulations on your win Anuika, well done xx
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Date: 5/20/2013 9:26:00 PM
Wonderful. I could hear all the moves you described. Congratulations. SuZ
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Date: 5/20/2013 8:44:00 PM
Congratulations!! A lovely winning poem... Linda
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Date: 5/20/2013 4:53:00 PM
Congratulations Aunika. This is a wonderful entry for the contest and you are a winner. We we will be reading more of your fine work I am sure. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/20/2013 2:01:00 PM
This is wonderful. I can hear it!! Congratulations!!
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Date: 5/20/2013 11:55:00 AM
Ahh!! Enjoyed reading your creative work..Yes, those trampolines do each one have their unique sound..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 5/20/2013 11:05:00 AM
Congrats on your win, my dear. You have a bright future with such amazing talent. Keep writing!!! :-)
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Date: 5/20/2013 10:58:00 AM
I love the originality of this poem. Nicely done. Congratulations on your well deserve win. Connie
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Date: 5/15/2013 6:00:00 AM
This is excellent, Aunika. I agree with Catie. This is better than some of the stuff people much older than you are posting. Good job!
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Date: 5/13/2013 7:13:00 PM
Lovely post from a very talented young lady..keep them coming :)
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Date: 5/11/2013 10:28:00 AM
Sounds like you do gymnastics. As we get older we tend to stop listening to things and we really should take the time to listen more. Nicely done and keep writing. It is encouraging to see poetry from young folks. love phyl
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