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Mirror Splashing scribbles Whispers in azure stream A lovely rousing melody As blissful winds sweep surface in delight Pondering light dazzles brightly Peaceful dancer waltzing Trapped inside the Mirror 4th Place Contest Winner Written: February 10, 2022 Give me a Rictameter! Poetry Contest Sponsored by: M.L. Kiser

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John Watt

Date: 2/18/2022 9:54:00 AM

Lasaad, the photo and poetic lines merge beautifully to paint a picture of gorgeous nature and evocative pondering. I love your verbs choices (splashing, whispers, sweep, dazzles, waltzing, trapped) to give movement and depth, love the image of the peaceful dancer in the mirror. Enjoyed this very much, congrats on your fine win ~ John

Meghan Hutchings

Date: 2/17/2022 11:40:00 AM

Congratulations! I love your metaphor with the pond and mirror. The dancer being trapped and your choice of beautiful words make this poem a winner! God bless...Meghan

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 2/16/2022 2:40:00 PM

Lovely echo of melody and dancer, and the use of mirror is so gracefully done, congratulations on you win~

Sam Kauffman

Date: 2/14/2022 12:36:00 PM

Your words tingle with graceful delight like a soft breeze over water, Lasaad! It literally "dazzles!" Love the last two lines "trapped inside the mirror!" So visual! Blessings. Best wishes for the contest.

Hilo Poet

Date: 2/12/2022 12:14:00 AM

Mirrors, a place of depth that does not lie nor laugh, Lasaad. Engaging lines that inflate and taper my friend, Aloha~William!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/11/2022 5:13:00 AM

Enjoyed the voice of your poem, Lasaad.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 2/10/2022 1:44:00 PM

Pure magic, my friend, Lasaad! A poetic melody! Blessings!