The Soul

She knows not when she was made
To wear the shackles and rest in pain

It's been ages since she opened these eyes 
But they are lying under so many layers

She can see, but the windows are not her own 
She can hear but the drums are of someone else

The Rind around her is tight
And  suffocating... 

She is the reason the Rind exists... 
But does It know... Does It appreciate? 

What if she tears it apart... And flee.. 
And why doesn’t she?


Pledges have enchained her? 
Or does she reckon flying a sin...? 

Eternity is calling its missing partner.. 
Bells of the Heaven are ringing.... 

But she hears nothing, for the walls are high
So thick that even celestial voices won't penetrate it

Caged in a body and bodily needs... 
She is losing her connection with heavens...

             *____________________*



Windows.. Eyes
Drums... Ears
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Liguori Avatar
November 21, 2021 at 9:59 AM
Thank you for entering the contest. Congrats on your placement. Robert
Zahid Avatar
March 2, 2024 at 5:56 AM
My pleasure
Hamilton Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 11:06 AM
Nice write Paghunda, congrats on placing!
Zahid Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 1:24 PM
Thank you Hamilton!
Proxenos Avatar
August 1, 2020 at 11:25 AM
Sheer desperation is a torch which shines brightly in this exceptionally well penned write. You write straight from your heart, I so enjoy your poetry. Blessings, Jennifer.
Zahid Avatar
August 28, 2020 at 7:53 PM
Humbled!
Agustin Avatar
June 22, 2020 at 8:54 AM
Thanks for sharing this... sad reality through your poetic style. God bless you.
Zahid Avatar
June 22, 2020 at 11:21 PM
Thank You Beata
One Avatar
June 21, 2020 at 6:20 AM
Interesting poem, and one that shows angst and desperation, to escape the imaginable chains.... You write very well.. a true talented poet..
Zahid Avatar
June 21, 2020 at 1:12 PM
Thank you Silent One.
Messina Avatar
June 18, 2020 at 10:22 PM
So well expressed. Beautifully written, Paghunda. All the best, Charlie
Zahid Avatar
June 22, 2020 at 11:22 PM
Thanks
Horsman Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 11:38 PM
Awesome poem, on one of the more dour factors of today. a poem that needed to be written.....
Zahid Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 11:51 PM
Thanks a lot Harry
Riabi Dziri Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 11:42 AM
I do feel that what you have just breathed of words is not just a wonderful work of Art.. a poetry of a rising imagination.. it is more than that! I read a soul in deep awareness of the shackles within.. a soul who knows the worth of the Self but torn apart because of the need to connect! Great poetry! Deep thoughts and feelings. A delight to read! My deepest regards and blessings.
Zahid Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 11:45 AM
Great appreciation... Thank you
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
June 15, 2020 at 10:11 PM
You have written of true pain and sorrow so well, Paghunda...very powerful. I pray for those who feel hopeless in their struggles. Blessings to you :) Rhonda xx
Zahid Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 11:34 AM
Thank you Rhonda. Stay blessed :)
Rigoler Avatar
June 14, 2020 at 11:03 AM
Enjoyed this, especially the line: "The Rind around her is tight & suffocating..." Yes, Americns and Europeans and others do bury their men in suits, uniforms, and other kinds of dress. I think it's silly. Cremation should be made law – at a price that's reasonable. Thank you for reading my work. Best to you in your writing endeavors. / Maurice
Zahid Avatar
June 14, 2020 at 11:08 AM
Thanks Maurice. I think that is common everywhere not just in Europe. Have a good day
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 14, 2020 at 9:41 AM
Hello Paghunda Zahid, So sad a poem. She should be free. I feel sad for her. Enjoy your day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 14, 2020 at 2:41 PM
Hello Paghunda, I really feel sad for her. You are welcome. Enjoy your day my friend.
Zahid Avatar
June 14, 2020 at 10:03 AM
Thanks Darlene
Rose  Avatar
June 14, 2020 at 6:03 AM
How sad when a woman is made to wear shackles and the angels don't sing to her anymore. We were all born free regardless of our sex, I pray one day she will be free again, Thank you for sharing xo
Zahid Avatar
June 14, 2020 at 6:04 AM
Thank you
Lamoureux Avatar
June 13, 2020 at 9:06 PM
Beautifully expressed.
Zahid Avatar
June 14, 2020 at 6:04 AM
Thanks Richard
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