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The Sorrow

Although it seems that, you no longer care I’ll never forget that you were there You played your part and I played mine But in the end it just wasn't our time You touched my heart When you wanted to start You called my name Then you played this game With everything lost and nothing to gain You just left me there, lying in the rain You broke our love that was so great And now things just turn to hate You left with no shame and no regrets After the months we've met Your presence united my soul with yours And now you've closed your door once more You once said, “you love me and you really care" But now I see those feelings weren't even there We’ve looked eye to eye And still I couldn't see those lies Because every time you said "Hi" You really just meant to say "Good Bye" You said we'd be forever And that this time it'd be better The word forever is such a lie The right word is that you will try Because now the word forever just makes me want to cry And making me want to go and die Killing me slowly deep down inside Leading to my demise

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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Date: 6/13/2024 2:53:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/15/2016 11:31:00 AM
Ben, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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