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The Softness of a Country Rose For Mary Jo Hoose

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This poem is dedicated to Mary Jo Hoose who kindly commented recently on one of my poems titled, "Wake Up Little Sleep Head."  Her comments are some of the most thoughtful any poet could ask for and I felt that I owed her a special kind of thanks.  So thank you Mary Jo!  It's a pleasure to meet you here in Poetry Soup and I hope we (especially I) remain poetically connected for as long as possible.  All the best to you and our fellow Soup Poet friends.  Peace, Terry   

A stranger lifted me up today While I was lost in my own self-centered universe, Silently crying about nobody else reading, commenting or caring About anything I’ve said, Considering myself poetically dead. I’ve been more concerned with the encroaching materialistic Responsibilities, requirements and concerns of living Instead of turning my attentions outward towards others And lifting myself out of this whirl pool of self-pity Into the ocean of giving. When to my wondrous delight dark turned to light As out of seemingly nowhere a fellow poet spoke gently and composed: “Your poetry is like the softness of a country rose.” And while I know not where she lives and breathes This furtherance of feeling was shared with me: “I too am blue as sky is gray and nothing more will do today Except ethereal connections are how we poets play.” I was more than moved, to say the least How this gypsy out of cyber space Renewed my poetic vow: To speak the truth simple, plain and clear As I know how. And how My words and hers connected Through the vacuum of space and time Is a story for another day and rhyme. Until then, I stand transformed By those few words she engendered – And would give anything to tell her How sweet and kind her words were rendered.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/29/2014 3:17:00 AM
She does have a tender heart. I'm sure she will be moved by this beautiful and dreamy write....
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Date: 11/28/2014 5:14:00 PM
what a lovely poem for Mary Jo I hope she gets to read it i know shes taking a bit of a break at the moment:-( Hugs jan xxx
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Date: 11/28/2014 5:20:00 PM
Thank you Jan! Thanks for reading and responding so quickly. I hope she does too because she does deserve a special "Thanks" for her thoughts on "Wake Up Little Sleep Head."

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