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The Snake Charmer

A vagabond once in a colorful ‘kurta’ 
And a turban wound round his head
Came into my house, one afternoon
A snake charmer,
Carrying pretzel serpents
In a wicker basket, 
The slimy things coiled inside.

At our door step, he put down the cargo
Begging my mother to allow a show

Sitting on haunches, 
He removed the lid
Three serpents were huddled inside 
As soon as the cage was opened,
They unwound their folds and came out 
On the tiled floor, they crawled round
Slipping and slithering awkwardly
One was a cobra, long and tawny 
Soon it stood erect and opened its hood
Hissing kisses with its hungry tongue

The charmer gently blew on his horn
In the lulling music
The snake began to dance
My eyes bulged out in utter disbelief 
Bewitchingly drawn to that mesmerizing scene

It was at that time my father came
With fire in his eyes, he shouted at my mother
“How dare you allow this here!
Are you playing with imminent death?
Stop this nonsense and let the man, go”

All were stunned and my mother shrunk back
Putting the snakes back in his basket, 
The man was about to leave
My compassionate father didn’t forget
To give him a generous tip, feeling pity
For a man who was out with a risky job
To eke out a living, encountering death face to face

Still the memory lingers, raising fears

8.Jan. 2022
The Snake Charmer Poetry Contest
Sponsor-Kal Michael Neumann
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Laurie Avatar
January 10, 2022 at 4:45 PM
Hello Valsa ... I've always been amazed to why these cobras react to the music. Personally I give snakes a wide berth An enjoyable verse indeed Valsa - Lindsay
Poet Avatar
January 9, 2022 at 8:21 AM
It was a frightening ordeal. Valsa, I'm sure that must have been breathtaking to see. What it does is incredible, and I'm not sure I've ever seen anything like that before. My dear friend, you did a fantastic job recounting the scenario. Best wishes for the contest
Wolf Avatar
January 8, 2022 at 7:15 PM
What a memory!! I guess 'charming' wouldn't be precisely the right word for it. ~ Gershon
Leffanta Avatar
January 9, 2022 at 10:38 AM
"Striking" is a perfect choice of words!
George Avatar
January 9, 2022 at 1:23 AM
My memory is not quite sharp. But such striking scenes will stay for ever in our memory ! Thank you dear friend ...
Buhagiar Avatar
January 8, 2022 at 1:45 PM
I have little knowledge about Asian Matters. Maybe there are charmers who ke snakes dance. I never met one. Lovely poem though. Blessings
George Avatar
January 9, 2022 at 1:21 AM
I must say, if you come to our country, you will see many such queer things . Thanks a lot Victor !
Leffanta Avatar
January 8, 2022 at 10:29 AM
One of the many dumb things I have done was to get down on my knees to photograph a rattlesnake ready to strike, with my camera on a unipod, thinking the unipod would confuse the snake whether to strike to the left or to the right. Best to leave snakes to their own! Enjoyed your poem, Valsa!
George Avatar
January 9, 2022 at 1:20 AM
That was indeed a daring and at the same time a foolish act ! However you escaped ....! If we leave them unmolested, snakes are harmless. Thanks Rico for your interesting response.
Deo Avatar
January 8, 2022 at 8:53 AM
You made a famed movie scene real to (your experienced) life. Thanx and Peace of Christ, anil
George Avatar
January 9, 2022 at 1:17 AM
It was like watching a movie. Usually snakes are not seen from such close quarters ! Thanks a lot Anil !
Ahmed Avatar
January 8, 2022 at 8:34 AM
ooh! slimy!! Three serpents !! "Soon it stood erect...with its hungry tongue!! Somebody hide me!! 4th Stanza, mystical!! See, your father feels like me!! Compassion is the key! So skillful you are, Valsa, to put in a message! Making a poem meaningful. The pictures of Charmer seems Rajasthani, I am not sure? All the best in winning with this nice poetry. Thanks - Marshall
George Avatar
January 9, 2022 at 1:15 AM
Thanks a lot Marshall for your elaborate, insightful and lovely comment ! Much gratitude my friend !
Pandit Avatar
January 8, 2022 at 8:29 AM
I can relate to your story for I too have seen them. Amazing how that works, not sure I understand. You narrated the scene brilliantly my friend. Best for a win, Valsa.
George Avatar
January 9, 2022 at 1:13 AM
Indians are familiar with such scenes. I don't think snake charmers are not there in any other part of the globe. Thank you very much Vijay !
Cunningham Avatar
January 8, 2022 at 7:52 AM
A frightening experience Valsa, must have been amazing to see though Tom
George Avatar
January 9, 2022 at 1:11 AM
It is indeed a frightening experience, especially as a child , but fascinating too ! Thanks Tom :)
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