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A vagabond once in a colorful ‘kurta’ And a turban wound round his head Came into my house, one afternoon A snake charmer, Carrying pretzel serpents In a wicker basket, The slimy things coiled inside. At our door step, he put down the cargo Begging my mother to allow a show Sitting on haunches, He removed the lid Three serpents were huddled inside As soon as the cage was opened, They unwound their folds and came out On the tiled floor, they crawled round Slipping and slithering awkwardly One was a cobra, long and tawny Soon it stood erect and opened its hood Hissing kisses with its hungry tongue The charmer gently blew on his horn In the lulling music The snake began to dance My eyes bulged out in utter disbelief Bewitchingly drawn to that mesmerizing scene It was at that time my father came With fire in his eyes, he shouted at my mother “How dare you allow this here! Are you playing with imminent death? Stop this nonsense and let the man, go” All were stunned and my mother shrunk back Putting the snakes back in his basket, The man was about to leave My compassionate father didn’t forget To give him a generous tip, feeling pity For a man who was out with a risky job To eke out a living, encountering death face to face Still the memory lingers, raising fears 8.Jan. 2022 The Snake Charmer Poetry Contest Sponsor-Kal Michael Neumann

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Date: 1/10/2022 4:45:00 PM
Hello Valsa ... I've always been amazed to why these cobras react to the music. Personally I give snakes a wide berth An enjoyable verse indeed Valsa - Lindsay
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Date: 1/9/2022 8:21:00 AM
It was a frightening ordeal. Valsa, I'm sure that must have been breathtaking to see. What it does is incredible, and I'm not sure I've ever seen anything like that before. My dear friend, you did a fantastic job recounting the scenario. Best wishes for the contest
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Date: 1/8/2022 7:15:00 PM
What a memory!! I guess 'charming' wouldn't be precisely the right word for it. ~ Gershon
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 1/9/2022 10:38:00 AM
"Striking" is a perfect choice of words!
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Valsa George
Date: 1/9/2022 1:23:00 AM
My memory is not quite sharp. But such striking scenes will stay for ever in our memory ! Thank you dear friend ...
Date: 1/8/2022 1:45:00 PM
I have little knowledge about Asian Matters. Maybe there are charmers who ke snakes dance. I never met one. Lovely poem though. Blessings
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Valsa George
Date: 1/9/2022 1:21:00 AM
I must say, if you come to our country, you will see many such queer things . Thanks a lot Victor !
Date: 1/8/2022 10:29:00 AM
One of the many dumb things I have done was to get down on my knees to photograph a rattlesnake ready to strike, with my camera on a unipod, thinking the unipod would confuse the snake whether to strike to the left or to the right. Best to leave snakes to their own! Enjoyed your poem, Valsa!
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Date: 1/9/2022 1:20:00 AM
That was indeed a daring and at the same time a foolish act ! However you escaped ....! If we leave them unmolested, snakes are harmless. Thanks Rico for your interesting response.
Date: 1/8/2022 8:53:00 AM
You made a famed movie scene real to (your experienced) life. Thanx and Peace of Christ, anil
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Valsa George
Date: 1/9/2022 1:17:00 AM
It was like watching a movie. Usually snakes are not seen from such close quarters ! Thanks a lot Anil !
Date: 1/8/2022 8:34:00 AM
ooh! slimy!! Three serpents !! "Soon it stood erect...with its hungry tongue!! Somebody hide me!! 4th Stanza, mystical!! See, your father feels like me!! Compassion is the key! So skillful you are, Valsa, to put in a message! Making a poem meaningful. The pictures of Charmer seems Rajasthani, I am not sure? All the best in winning with this nice poetry. Thanks - Marshall
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Valsa George
Date: 1/9/2022 1:15:00 AM
Thanks a lot Marshall for your elaborate, insightful and lovely comment ! Much gratitude my friend !
Date: 1/8/2022 8:29:00 AM
I can relate to your story for I too have seen them. Amazing how that works, not sure I understand. You narrated the scene brilliantly my friend. Best for a win, Valsa.
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Valsa George
Date: 1/9/2022 1:13:00 AM
Indians are familiar with such scenes. I don't think snake charmers are not there in any other part of the globe. Thank you very much Vijay !
Date: 1/8/2022 7:52:00 AM
A frightening experience Valsa, must have been amazing to see though Tom
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Date: 1/9/2022 1:11:00 AM
It is indeed a frightening experience, especially as a child , but fascinating too ! Thanks Tom :)

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