The Slothful Person

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Seven Deadly Sins - Sloth by so-aesthetic on DeviantArt

"Idle hands are the devil's playthings." Quote by _Benjamin Franklin With each thing and each person alienated, To the sad point that all things are hated in life; Sloth dwells in a void of despair they created, Their own existence is destroyed with their own knife. _____________________ July 4, 2022 Written for the contest, Sin of Sloth sponsor, Margarita Lillico Rhyming verified on RhymeZone (Quatrain Rhyme pattern) Syllables verified on HowManySyllables (12 per line)

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 7/9/2022 7:04:00 AM

Oh, I like this Constance! Your last stanza is powerful. Linda

Constance La France
Date: 7/10/2022 4:43:00 AM

Linda, thank you so much for the compliment on my poem, blessings ~Constance

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/5/2022 4:28:00 PM

Wow! The picture and poem! Well done! Inspirational!

Constance La France
Date: 7/6/2022 7:09:00 AM

Kim, thank you so much for the compliment and comment, blessings ~Constance

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/5/2022 10:06:00 AM

You put a lot of thought into your poem on the sin of sloth, Constance. Very nicely done. You have worked all your life hard at the things you do so well. I admire you for that. Thanks for enjoying my entry in your contest. Ollyver was so dear to me.

Constance La France
Date: 7/6/2022 7:11:00 AM

Andrea, thank you so much for the compliment on my poem, yes, I did some research on the theme for sure. I have worked hard at mastering poetry writing that is true. Your entry in my last contest was so emotional, how could I not love it, blessings ~Constance

Michael Tor

Date: 7/4/2022 10:49:00 PM

Your words speak the truth Constance. We need to be responsible in life and make an effort in supporting ourselves and not looking for a hand out like so many do. God bless you

Constance La France
Date: 7/5/2022 7:44:00 AM

Michael, thank you so much for the visit and comment, yes, we cannot let our minds waste away and lose grip on this beautiful world and God, blessings ~Constance