The Slip-ins

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"The Slip-ins" 

Why should I continue to write
these feathery songs, 
these blanched banjo tomes,
these wilting poésies
of a lost little life ever circling
like a memory stone thrown
across a lake of discontent 
into the bottom of a dark pond
where the sulphar trolls 
with their attached pilot fish
of no kingdom come spin
their spindly venomous and childish reasons 
along their tongues those sticky webs like a cast net 
toads reeling blue flies in 
smiling at all the joy stolen 
where they store the chord of me
silent and vibrationally buzzing
like a good mummy 
for later feeding, 
I am trapped 
in the blistering better knowledge
of those angry joyless monsters 
who like love-hungry creepers slip in
ripping me away, pulling me down 
far away from Blue Sky


Candide Diderot. ‘25 



“Imagination is the only weapon in the war against reality.”/Lewis Carroll 

“War is an absolute failure of imagination, scientific and political. That a war can be represented as helping a people to 'feel good' about themselves, or their country, is a measure of that failure."/Adrienne Rich 

“War is an invention of the human mind. The human mind can invent peace.”/Norman Cousins 

“There are not more than five musical notes, yet the combinations of these five give rise to more melodies than can ever be heard.” /
Sun Tzu, The Art of War 

“Imagine”/ John Lennon (Lyrics).

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Date: 4/8/2025 12:30:00 AM
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