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The Sleeping Child

That child is like a washing machine when tucked within her bed, Arms and legs flail everywhere No chance you’ll find a head. I expect that's hiding somewhere down where you’d expect to find the toes Where a noggin normally rests Well! No one really knows. You lay her down to go to sleep The first move is the “wash” Linen, gets all pushed around erratically till its squashed. Here’s the move I call the rinse This one’s rather tame. Motion, and then rotations start But not quite yet insane. Ye Gods!! Here’s the start of the spin cycle. As bed begins to rumble Thrashes mirrored by crashes Artistic gymnastic tumbles. Blankets, pillows, clothes All flying through the air One stuffed toy arcs past the light Whoa! Had to duck a teddy bear! Of course she always sleeps Through all this absurdity Each morning I lament the fact that she was tucked in carelessly.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/12/2016 7:27:00 PM
Hi Mark,back to your fun persona i see. Well my friend, i don't know about you but i was the same way. I always woke with no bed linen on the bed, mind you, come to think on that, i am still that way. I really enjoyed the laugh and the memories of my own it kicked off Mark. I have to save this one, for the humour and the memories it gives me....Vladislav.
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Mark Woods
Date: 1/13/2016 10:21:00 PM
Thankyou Sir, if she is a washing machine then I am/was a cyclone with the addition of thunder!
Date: 9/10/2015 2:57:00 PM
You are an undoubted talent. I did not know you had met my child who takes the whole bed with him we he turns. Excellent poetry, Mark. I am impressed ... CayCay
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 9/13/2015 12:13:00 PM
That's allowed - it happens ... CayCay
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Mark Woods
Date: 9/12/2015 8:48:00 PM
Ps, didn't mean to demean you positive comments. Think I was having a bad day.
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Mark Woods
Date: 9/11/2015 1:51:00 PM
You are too kind, But nope i'm not a talent, just a random man having random thoughts in a random corner of the world. If I can make people laugh, cry or think I've done good.
Date: 9/2/2015 10:08:00 AM
Love these light-hearted posts. A laugh in the morning is always a good way to start the day. You have captured a child's sleep habits precisely. I enjoyed your write. Will be looking for more in the future. :)) Janece
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Date: 9/3/2015 12:51:00 AM
Cheers Janece. I'll get into some more humorous muses in the near future.

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