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The Skylark

Beating wings of gold, To his breast they fold. From the heights now descending, Soaring on winds fair. Joys of life declare The skylark's songs unending. In the meadow sweet, Comes their call to greet The new morning wet with dew. Swaying on a reed, Seeing my deep need With my dreams away he flew....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/23/2014 1:08:00 PM
yes, that ending, like Roy said, gave it a great twist. Nicely done and congrats for your win.
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Date: 8/23/2014 7:59:00 AM
Very vivid and colorful. grats on your awesome win :)
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Date: 8/22/2014 6:42:00 PM
Love the way your brought your lark into the realm of human need and emotion. Congratulations, Barbara.
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Date: 8/22/2014 3:59:00 PM
Love the ending, Barbara. A twist I didn't expect... Congratulations, Roy
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Date: 8/22/2014 10:04:00 AM
Congrats on a wonderful win BG
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Date: 8/22/2014 6:11:00 AM
Thanks for the entry and my congrats on your 3rd Place win, Barbara
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Date: 7/28/2014 1:17:00 PM
Oh Barbara, this is really lovely. It is sure to be a top winner!
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Date: 7/16/2014 7:11:00 PM
Great poem! I have always enjoyed listening and watching birds.
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Date: 7/16/2014 3:08:00 PM
I love how you did this rhyming BG...Hopefully new dreams will be made..hugs Tim
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