The Sky Larked Moon

Blue black was the night
a cat clawed moon fright
larked against the sullen sky
no blow to bemoan
no flight to atone
and so no stars were on high.

The air leaden, gray,
weak of shadow's play
feline howls, growl, harmonized
uncovered shivers
bodies that quiver 
by a claw moon undisguised.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Chandra Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 9:57 PM
Beautiful write Debbie.
Johnson Avatar
August 23, 2014 at 4:39 PM
Nice seeing you at the top. Congratulations on your winning entry. Love, joyce
Dietrich Avatar
August 23, 2014 at 12:54 PM
yours was so different and metaphorical. Very nice. congrats on your win.
Beck Avatar
August 23, 2014 at 2:49 AM
great effort Debs....now THIS is poetry like i could never learn to write.... very good choice of vocab....epecially "claw moon" .....excellent, girl!
Trichet Avatar
August 22, 2014 at 10:22 PM
Fantastic Debbie, truly great piece. Congrats on top win
Gibson Avatar
August 22, 2014 at 5:22 PM
This was so different, Debbie; you have that rare gift of finding some obscure kernel in the contest theme and turning it into a knock out winning poem. Made me think of Halloween. Congratulations on your top spot.
Jerden Avatar
August 22, 2014 at 3:44 PM
This could have fit Charlotte's Dark Poetry contest, I think. I felt like something was about to jump out of the shadows. Cheers, Roy
Richards Avatar
August 22, 2014 at 10:05 AM
This is a great poem for the season coming in October.....!! Hooray for you!
Poteet Avatar
August 22, 2014 at 9:56 AM
Very creative, Debbie, congratulations on your win. My favorite part is the last three lines, so image full.
May Avatar
August 22, 2014 at 9:54 AM
Congrats on a great win Debbie...hugs
Allison Avatar
August 22, 2014 at 7:57 AM
wonderful take on the theme Debbie many congrats on the top spot:-) Hugs jan xxx
Mehta Avatar
August 22, 2014 at 5:50 AM
Thanks for the entry and my congrats on your 1st Place win, Deb. Light and Love
Devonshire Avatar
August 3, 2014 at 12:29 PM
Dear Deb, Very strong emotions in this poem. I love the tone of darkness and a mystic "claw moon." Awesome, Hon! (Shadow's always kind to me. I feel privileged to enter her contest, just as I enter yours because she seems to recognize the effort that goes into writing and judges without favoritism. You do the same, dear. Love you, Carolyn
Mister Roboto Avatar
August 1, 2014 at 6:09 PM
"No flight to atone" I absolutely adore what you do with words in every poem! I learned the word Atonement in the Bible when I was a small child. Along with Excrement in the Privy! ~ Some of my first literacy memories. No joke!
Kendrick Avatar
August 1, 2014 at 8:55 AM
Great use of the work Lark..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit by my blog..Sara
Lamoureux Avatar
August 1, 2014 at 7:41 AM
This one brought to mind Michael Jackson's thriller. I can almost hear Vincent price reading it. I also dropped by to say thanks for choosing my poem in your contest. I am still curious to hear your thoughts on my changes to my blitz poem.
A. Sharma Avatar
August 1, 2014 at 1:12 AM
Altogether different take Debbie! Wonderful write indeed !
Dietrich Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 11:16 PM
very different one for the contest, Debs. A unique look at the theme. I have sent you an email on blank verse. WAtch for it!!
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