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The Sky

The bright sun hot for me burned my skin The moon night full is best sky lights up Stars that shine one~two more make a wish Date Written:1/26/2023 10 Place

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/31/2023 6:39:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poem, Paula - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/31/2023 11:40:00 AM

Thank You for writing. This was not easy to write. Since I wrote "God's Eyes" on 1/20/2022, I look at the sky with a different eye. Have a great/blessed day..................

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/30/2023 5:00:00 AM

Thank you for your participation in my contest. I enjoyed reading your entry. Very creative way to go. Sara

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/30/2023 8:12:00 AM

Thank You for writing. Glad you enjoyed my Sky write. It is an honor to have this win in your Tricube Poetry Contest. It was not easy to write but enjoyed bringing my sky to life. Since I wrote "God's Eyes" on 1/20/2022, I look at the sky with a different eye. Have a great/blessed day..................

Christuraj Alex

Date: 1/29/2023 9:28:00 PM

Vivid scene. Beautiful. Congratulations!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/30/2023 8:08:00 AM

Thank You for writing. Glad you like my write. Since I wrote "God's Eyes" on 1/20/2022, I look at the sky with a different eye. Have a great/blessed day..................

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/27/2023 7:49:00 PM

sweet form ~ charming

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/28/2023 1:28:00 PM

Thank You for writing. Glad you found my Sky write charming. Not Easy to write but enjoyed bringing it to life. Since I wrote "God's Eyes" on 1/20/2022, I look at the sky with a different eye. Have a great/blessed day..................

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/26/2023 8:14:00 PM

Very nice; not easily done. Good luck in the contest Paula

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/27/2023 8:41:00 AM

Thank You for writing and for your good luck. Glad you like this write. It took some extra time/thought to write this one. Not Easy. Since I wrote "God's Eyes" on 1/20/2022, I look at the sky with a different eye. Have a great/blessed day..................

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 1/26/2023 7:26:00 PM

I love to watch the sky especially the northern lights. Good luck in Sara's contest. love phyl

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/27/2023 8:39:00 AM

Thank You for writing and for your good luck. You are very lucky to see the northern lights. Wish they were here. Since I wrote "God's Eyes" on 1/20/2022, I look at the sky with a different eye. Have a great/blessed day..................

Michael Tor

Date: 1/26/2023 5:29:00 PM

Love this Paula nothing like looking at a night sky on a clear night.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/27/2023 8:36:00 AM

Thank You for writing. Glad you love my Sky write. The night sky is a beautiful sight. It holds many secrets. I wrote "God's Eyes" on 1/20/2022. I now look at the sky with a different set of eyes. Have a great/blessed day..................

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/26/2023 4:18:00 PM

I love to look at the sky.. Nice one Paula :)