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The Skeleton

A bone foundation, covered with meat and skin Like limbs of a tree, some are strong and some are broken And some skeletons hide in closets

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/9/2009 8:00:00 AM
Very thought provoking, Danny. With so much hunger in America we see many people who seem to be covered with just a bit of "meat and skin." The last line is a nice twist! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/9/2009 7:57:00 AM
And I found a few of the ones in the closet! lol Enjoyed your poem...Marty
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Date: 10/9/2009 7:31:00 AM
Brillant write Danny! So true to life, smile. Great job very well written. Keep writing and I'll keep reading. Have a wonderful inspiring weekend! Thanks for sharing. Love Light Truth Patty
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Date: 10/9/2009 3:30:00 AM
Nicely done comparison. I really like this one. Keep writing. Sara
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