The Simple Life of a Drifting Wood

What am I to you 
But a piece of drifting wood,
Lifeless and devoid of any direction

For while it is , 
it has always been of me
And as it flows i am dragged
 along with it

What is peace to me?
Having no objections
Or no purpose of intention 

I am being dragged to unknown regions
Sunk to varying depths of currents
Twisted and resisted
Adorned in gashes
Flayed and enslaved 
by all those that are elements

What am i to you
But a piece of drifting wood
Drenched and weighted down,
Existing to be refuse
Despised not to be burnt,
As my should purpose  


Where I am going is 
Unknown to me
Just a piece of drifting wood
Being baked in torrent storms
Scarred by inflicting
Bleeding through tears

What am I to you?
Drifting wood?
Refuse?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 3/7/2018 5:43:00 AM
You depict very well the fatalist mindset of so many youth today. How do we get around it? Even driftwood has its uses in decorative yardwork, even inside many more affluent homes. My cry to my nearly teenage grandson, you are worth much in the big picture of life; you just need to find out where your niche lies. My second treat of the day from your pen, Sizwe, I like your style.
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Sizwe Hlabisa
Date: 3/7/2018 2:25:00 PM
Hi reason... Thank you so much for the positive words. I think u got wat i was trying to convey. I want people to think deeply, which I believe is the point of poetry. Much appreciated
Date: 10/27/2017 9:18:00 AM
Fantastic metaphor! Incredible pen. xomo!
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Sizwe Hlabisa
Date: 10/27/2017 9:45:00 AM
Thank you Maureen. Much appreciated
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