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August-29- 2025

Silent Kiss Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Constance La France

~ PLACED FIRST~


 

The Silent KISS

“One can get through any hurt, if the one who causes hurt shows sincere remorse and expresses love again” - By Poet
      
  
Like heavy boots on vacant streets, his harsh words
   Rang in my ears. Never has he been so very rash.
        Why did he my heart deeply pierce?

 
The whole night I lay crying, soaking my pillow.
    In severe pain, my face was swollen and red

  
 Next morning seeing my wan, puffed- up face
      He quietly asked, so much concerned,
    ‘Did you have your usual migraine?
  You look terribly tired and worried’


He seems to have forgotten all that he said
    Gently applying balm on my forehead
              In a tone of assurance, he said, “Don’t worry
   In no time all your pain will be fled”

      
My mind, tangled and messy became suddenly calm.
When I felt his lips upon my cheeks, tears began to flow.

 
His silent kiss, stamped like love’s gentle whisper
     Warmly and tenderly, at an unexpected moment,
          After a slight brawl, when my heart was torn,
   Had the sweetness of honey and I melded into him
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Guptar Avatar
September 3, 2025 at 11:26 PM
Congratulations, Valsa, to be among top winners in this contest with a lovely realistic poem on the ups and downs of couple`s life. Love that is built on rocks withstands the storms of life and sweet is the fruit of reconciliation. Wishing you a cheerful day.
Poet Avatar
September 3, 2025 at 7:02 AM
While mending a broken heart might require time, unconditional affection never fades. Sensational, highly heated, suitable, Congrats on your top winning placement.
La France Avatar
September 3, 2025 at 6:17 AM
Valsa, congratulations on your win in my The Silent Kiss contest with your beautiful poem, I love the image and quote. Blessings ~Constance
George Avatar
September 4, 2025 at 4:37 AM
Thank you so much for the high placement given. Also thanks for holding the contest.
Messina Avatar
September 1, 2025 at 4:38 AM
Beautiful write, Valsa. Best wishes for a win! Charlie
Narain Avatar
August 29, 2025 at 11:19 AM
Beautifu tender poem, love is eternal.
DiMino Avatar
August 29, 2025 at 7:43 AM
The heart may not heal perfectly...but pure love, always perfect, remains the same. Deep emotionally charged right. Best of luck in contest.
Andresen Avatar
August 29, 2025 at 1:20 AM
- Love is deeper than words... a beautiful and tender poem, Valsa :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
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