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The Silence of My Lust

There was sweat on my brow, beads of them as I approached her. I was a young man, still green. She was a mature woman like the long blades grow free in the lush of nature. My hand in hers she took me into her warmth. Nervous, shy you could hear grass grow in the quiet of my fear in the silence of my lust. I knew nothing. As we rolled in the dew of sex as I fumbled and groped, I in some instinctive wisdom entrusted myself fully to her. She set our bodies in a fluid motion my virginity now neatly cut. We spent days as I explored the fresh sweet air of 'us'. It was then I became a man. Learned how you hold a flower how you manicure the stem how you water the soil how you delicately hold the petals. It was then I became a gardener. A gardener worthy to tend a garden so vital. It was then I learned how to love a woman. 30~12~2014 Armand
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Levasseur Avatar
December 31, 2020 at 7:48 AM
Gorgeous piece of writing. Your picture does not show up, however.
Alltraine Avatar
July 30, 2015 at 1:38 PM
Raw, gritty imagery, yet so elegantly written - my favourite kind of poetry!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
January 11, 2015 at 4:06 AM
I love it MAurice only you can drew such!>. :)!
Guzzi Avatar
December 31, 2014 at 9:03 PM
Yes, I belief you, so, full of emotion. Nice use of euphemisms! Happy New Year Amand
Kayode Avatar
December 31, 2014 at 6:06 PM
A good lesson Maurice,happy new year...huggs
Kiser Avatar
December 31, 2014 at 3:23 PM
I love this imagery: "Learned how you hold a flower how you manicure the stem how you water the soil how you delicately hold the petals. " Have a great new year, Maurice!
Callus Avatar
December 31, 2014 at 11:59 AM
An excellent poem by which to bid goodbye to the old year, Armand! I can relate to that mature woman! A moment in time which you still manage to hold on to (back to previous poem:)) #7 All the best to you!! // paul
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December 31, 2014 at 8:03 AM
Dear Maurice: Thank you for the support my friend. Here's wishing you and your loved ones A Happy New Year filled with peace, joy and love. All my best wishes on the last day of 2014, Leon.
Dietrich Avatar
December 31, 2014 at 1:51 AM
were you the graduate? haha
Dietrich Avatar
December 31, 2014 at 1:51 AM
this is gorgeous metaphor, Armand and How happy I am to now be able to call you by Armand!! Love when you write this way . A BIG fave!!
Nunez Avatar
December 30, 2014 at 11:41 PM
Subtle, sexy and sublime, a throwback to the time, of someone's coming of age, lovemaking, controlled rampage! Happy New Year, lord of surrender, garden and flower, from your fan and reader...Kim Patrice :)
Chircop Avatar
December 30, 2014 at 3:19 PM
A fantastic poem..Im not returning the favo(u)r ,but I have to favour it.: ). Ps-Have a blessed new year dear friend .Charma.
Smith Avatar
December 30, 2014 at 2:53 PM
A master gardener you have become...well versed my friend
Manassian Avatar
December 30, 2014 at 11:10 AM
Oh Armand...this is just sweeter than sweet. Brian Adams...when you love a woman....Oh, teach others how to make a woman bloom. You seem to be a great teacher.
Allison Avatar
December 30, 2014 at 10:40 AM
what incredible imagery Maurice - am in awe of your creativity my friend! Hugs jan xxx
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December 30, 2014 at 10:29 AM
how you hold a flower how you manicure the stem how you water the soil how you delicately hold the petals. Indeed NATURE is the best teacher.Incredible Maurice particularly this line " Nervous, shy you could hear grass grow"- a dream line every poet's envy. You rock. Wish you a prosperous 2015.Enjoy this year with your self with your family with your dear ones.I pray to God for your success and well being. Love and Regards from my family-RAJAT
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