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The Sigh

It started with dry leaves pirouetting around the yard on the back of a skittish breeze, the magnolia rubbing against the fence as if scratching an itch, a few raindrops teasing a thirst. Then, distant thunder. The sound seemed to cue a tightening in the core, an instinctive brace against what was to come. Soon, a sudden flash… followed by a loud crack and a shudder sent rolling through the guts of every living thing. Wind clawed at seams, unpicking the afternoon to fling leaf, branch and limb into tumbling air, cartwheeling chairs across the lawn. Hailstones tore the fragile into bite size bits, beheading blooms before suddenly stopping and crusting the ground in a white shroud of innocence. It was over. An unusual quiet let soft sounds soothe the air - trickling water, the tap of weighted leaves shedding raindrops, murmurings of ice melt. I felt an easing as if an anger within me had been released leaving only a sigh.

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Date: 1/18/2024 6:15:00 AM
“… a few raindrops teasing a thirst.” Lines like that don’t come easily to many poets. They do to you. At first, I thought you were leading into a musical soundscape of nature, which you did. However, by the end you gave your lines much more depth and meaning.
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Paul Willason
Date: 1/19/2024 4:18:00 AM
Not sure where some of these lines originate from...crawl out of the subconscious no doubt...I think all poets are so grateful when it happens. Gratitude too for your continuing encouragement ...gives me a lift when I feel somewhat challenged. Many thanks Lin.
Date: 1/18/2024 1:19:00 AM
Another that calls to be the beginning of a book that you know you wouldn't be able to put down... Beautiful imagery and again a lens on a memory and a future event that becomes part of the reader. What a gift you give Paul x
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Paul Willason
Date: 1/19/2024 4:10:00 AM
Great to receive your comments DD...as always thoughtful and carrying the usual kindness which you dispense so generously...your long time support treasured. Pleased that the poem found its way to speak...
Date: 1/17/2024 4:30:00 PM
your descriptions and imagery were powerful...made me feel as if I was in the storm with you...reminded me of the tornadoes I've experienced in my lifetime--the real ones and the metaphorical ones. Whenever I'm intensely angry (which is rare), I always dream of tornadoes. I suppose their symbolic of the inner turmoil swirling inside my psyche. Any, I enjoyed the read. I love your poetic style! have a pleasant evening, Sara
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Paul Willason
Date: 1/19/2024 4:01:00 AM
Fortunately we don't get tornadoes here,,,more like summer storms, shortlived but intense. At their height they seem to crossover into the psyche, feed off ones emotions. I like to get out he way and give nature the stage...somertimes it works. Thankyou so much Sara for your positive feedback.

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