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The Shorter Half of a Wishbone

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Two parties with a fifty-fifty chance
Of getting the longer half, but in this game
Of sheer luck, one gets the wish fulfillment
One literally comes up short
When the wishbone splits in two

How sad to end up with the shorter half?
Close, but no cigar. An unlucky break
Then lady luck smiles and disappears
In a split second. Isn't it tantamount to a scale 
Tipping the balance to the wrong end?

At one fell swoop, one who holds 
The shorter half is out of favor, a gambler 
With a snake eyes dice. A wish so 
Tantalizingly close, hynotized 
Into deep sleep 

But there's a technique to improving 
The odds of ending up with the longer half
You simply pull instead of attempt to break it off  
Glory could be yours, If you grab the upper part 
Of the wishbone, instead of the tail-end


Date written and posted: 11/02/2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 11/10/2018 10:46:00 AM
I'm glad you were inspired to do the last stanza!! I think I will never pull on another wishbone ever again since we so rarely eat this kind of food!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 11/10/2018 11:19:00 AM
That makes two of us, lol! Thanks for the continued support, Andrea!:-) Have a blessed weekend...
Date: 11/6/2018 6:43:00 PM
I really like the message in your poem, Edward. The title made me interested in seeing it because as kids, we always did the wishbone thing. I learned the trick was to just simply hold it. The one doing the work to break it usually ends up with the shorter half. Maybe there is a message in THAT (let the other guy do all the work? haha)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 11/8/2018 4:54:00 PM
"The one doing the work to break it usually ends up with the shorter half" That is so true! lol. I appreciate the comments and visit, Andrea!:-)

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