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The Shorter Half of a Wishbone

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Two parties with a fifty-fifty chance Of getting the longer half, but in this game Of sheer luck, one gets the wish fulfillment One literally comes up short When the wishbone splits in two How sad to end up with the shorter half? Close, but no cigar. An unlucky break Then lady luck smiles and disappears In a split second. Isn't it tantamount to a scale Tipping the balance to the wrong end? At one fell swoop, one who holds The shorter half is out of favor, a gambler With a snake eyes dice. A wish so Tantalizingly close, hynotized Into deep sleep But there's a technique to improving The odds of ending up with the longer half You simply pull instead of attempt to break it off Glory could be yours, If you grab the upper part Of the wishbone, instead of the tail-end Date written and posted: 11/02/2018

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Date: 11/10/2018 10:46:00 AM
I'm glad you were inspired to do the last stanza!! I think I will never pull on another wishbone ever again since we so rarely eat this kind of food!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 11/10/2018 11:19:00 AM
That makes two of us, lol! Thanks for the continued support, Andrea!:-) Have a blessed weekend...
Date: 11/6/2018 6:43:00 PM
I really like the message in your poem, Edward. The title made me interested in seeing it because as kids, we always did the wishbone thing. I learned the trick was to just simply hold it. The one doing the work to break it usually ends up with the shorter half. Maybe there is a message in THAT (let the other guy do all the work? haha)
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Date: 11/8/2018 4:54:00 PM
"The one doing the work to break it usually ends up with the shorter half" That is so true! lol. I appreciate the comments and visit, Andrea!:-)

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