Constance La France Poet Diminished Hexaverse

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The Ship of Dreams, Titanic

 
A sad love story,
A luxury ship,
In broken pieces,
A girl and a boy,
A heart-shaped diamond.

An old woman,
Tells the story,
Of Rose and Jack,
The doomed lovers.

Rose so lost,
Life mindless,
And endless.

And Jack,
Artist.

Poor.

Bow of ship meeting,
Love their destiny,
The heart will go on,
Unsinkable ship,
O, but it did sink.

Row boats for rich,
Desperation,
Freezing water,
Lovers entwine.

The ship split,
My heart will,
Go on . . . on.

The song,
Music.

Sad.

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January 2, 2016


Poetry/Diminished Hexaverse/The Ship Of Dreams, Titanic
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Poet Destroyer A February 3, 2016 at 11:34 PM Anytime. LINDA Constance La France February 4, 2016 at 8:27 AM Linda, thanks again. ..

Poet Destroyer A January 31, 2016 at 10:15 PM Broken, Congrats on your movie win. LOVE LINDA - Constance La France February 1, 2016 at 1:35 AM Linda, thanks so much for the congrats and the love -

Susan Gentry January 29, 2016 at 1:15 AM Congratulations on your #1 win with this excellent movie poem. Constance La France January 29, 2016 at 2:46 PM Susan, thanks for the congratulations and the excellent ~

Richard Lamoureux January 25, 2016 at 9:45 AM Well done! Congrats on another top win. Constance La France January 25, 2016 at 2:40 PM Richard, thank you so much for the congrats and the well done !

Skat A January 24, 2016 at 3:35 PM Hi Broken, Congrats on your favorite movie win. SKAT ** Constance La France January 24, 2016 at 5:13 PM Thanks

Andrea Dietrich January 24, 2016 at 3:12 PM Hey, a double one!! well done, my friend. Congrats on a stellar win. Constance La France January 24, 2016 at 5:14 PM Andrea, thanks for the congrats, I love that word stellar, and yep from no wins to wins and wins... wonderful ~

Jan Allison January 24, 2016 at 2:27 PM dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs jan xx Constance La France January 24, 2016 at 5:15 PM Jan, thanks so much for the congrats and the hugs !

Anindya Mohan Tagore January 24, 2016 at 12:43 PM Wonderfully crafted imagery of a great movie ...truly enjoyed the interpretation. Warm regards, Bobby Constance La France January 24, 2016 at 1:49 PM Bobby, thanks for visiting my poem and for the nice comment, appreciate!

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores January 23, 2016 at 9:10 PM Congratulations on the placement of the contest Constance. Constance La France January 23, 2016 at 10:17 PM Nayda, thanks for a wonderful contest and my awesome placement, I am thrilled and honored ~

Viv Wigley January 6, 2016 at 12:53 AM A nice tribute to a big ship and a big movie, BW. A bartender in our local pub probably wishes it hadn't been made- every time we call him to serve us a drink, we shout 'Jack....Jack....' like Rose did when she was floating on the wreckage. He hates it. Good luck in the contest. Viv x Constance La France January 6, 2016 at 1:02 AM Viv, oh I do recall that scene in the movie, so heartbreaking, but I admit she did call his name a lot... thanks for visiting my poem, appreciate ~

Thomas Martin January 3, 2016 at 8:37 PM great one on the subject of the Titanic. loved the form. Constance La France January 4, 2016 at 9:25 AM Thank you Thomas ~

Dalia Shahein January 3, 2016 at 6:58 PM I adore this movie and you gave it it's right in these mesmerizing words , such an spectacular poem my dear one of my FAV.... many hugs / / :) dalia Constance La France January 4, 2016 at 9:26 AM Dalia, thanks for the spectacular and for the fav, appreciate !

Andrea Dietrich January 2, 2016 at 7:35 PM hey, I have not even checked out this contest yet, but now I am getting the idea. it HAS to be done in THIS form. hmmm, this will be a fun one to try! WEll done. if she is allowing more than one of these, I think a movie as long as Titanic was requires two at least!! You chose a great movie to emulate. Constance La France January 3, 2016 at 1:27 AM Andrea, yes you can do more that one, I souped Nayda to ask, yes it is a 3 hour movie so two were indeed needed, thanks for the well done, it does have to be done in Diminished Hex, cannot wait to read yours, how will you pick with all the movies you see... lol

White Sage January 2, 2016 at 7:11 PM loved the movie too...I wish you good luck in the contest Vie White Sage January 3, 2016 at 1:53 AM The bodygaurd? an hindi film right? Constance La France January 3, 2016 at 1:28 AM Thanks Sage, the other movie I was thinking of was The Bodyguard, I loved that one also for the music and story ~

Jan Allison January 2, 2016 at 6:09 PM Oh You were clever to do this particular film - I had chosen another film but someone else had done that so I chose another film i love - good luck with the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Constance La France January 2, 2016 at 6:50 PM Jan, thanks for visiting, I have always loved the movie Titanic, so it was a natural choice, my other would have been The Bodyguard ~

Skat A January 2, 2016 at 6:02 PM This is amazing Constance La France January 2, 2016 at 6:50 PM Skat thanks for the amazing !!