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The Shape of Winter

~Winter, breathe my name Deep into the book of light. Sing me drunk, my love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Brian Sambourne
Date: 1/12/2024 8:09:00 PM
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A superb Haiku, Mat. Unexpected phrases in 'The Shape of Winter,' like "...into the book of light," contribute to the creative originality of the piece. Your final line hits a bulls eye - how we wish a drunken serenade through winter days. Best wishes, Brian
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 1/12/2024 9:30:00 PM
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thank you kindly for the visit, brian
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/3/2024 6:47:00 AM
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well written Mat good haiku tnks for visiting my page hugs Shadow
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 1/4/2024 7:45:00 PM
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all the best to you shadow
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/31/2023 9:34:00 PM
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Intriguing ink, sir... I myself find 'drunk' the best way to handle the howling winds and the icy pathways...
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 12/31/2023 9:39:00 PM
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thanks to you and those you love
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/28/2023 11:47:00 AM
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Interesting work. Thank you for sharing it with us. Sara K
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 1/4/2024 7:45:00 PM
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thank you for the visit
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Paige Hind
Date: 12/27/2023 7:46:00 PM
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A beautiful haiku...very romantic for the season!
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 1/4/2024 7:46:00 PM
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thank you for the reply, paige
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/25/2023 6:02:00 PM
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Wow that is so pretty and also different from my own feelings on xmas
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Tom Woody
Date: 12/25/2023 5:55:00 AM
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I'd rather spring sing to me, but I suppose winter has its own unique charms
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 12/25/2023 3:34:00 PM
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spring is an elusive little bird up this way - you have a peaceful christmas and creative new year
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Silent One
Date: 12/25/2023 2:25:00 AM
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Deep imagery in your haiku.. nice one Mat.
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 12/25/2023 3:35:00 PM
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thank you - peace to you and the ones you love

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